rather not high jump every 20 minutes, well maybe o.k.

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Feb 2004 · 2 comments

Look, just like someone interrupting torrid thoughts just to check on oil level, its o.k. now to keep billing hourly for work done- cleaning sinks, washing vegetables, sweeping under bed, absolutely o.k. to keep the conversation going for the rhythms sake and you might learn something(raking furrowed rows, planting seeds)

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[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Feb-04/11:37 PM Reply

I'm listening to billy idol and curling my lip in la currently

[8] zodiac 6-Feb-04/7:22 AM Reply

Were you interrupted while writing this (prhaps by one of the eponymous high-jumps)? What you have is rather good in a fitter-happier sort of way, but it breaks off really, really abruptly and unsatisfyingly. So we dont necessarily read poetry to be satisfied, you say. Buncombe, I say. -8-