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rather not high jump every 20 minutes, well maybe o.k. (Free verse) by A. Nomaly

Look, just like someone interrupting torrid thoughts just to check on oil level, its o.k. now to keep billing hourly for work done- cleaning sinks, washing vegetables, sweeping under bed, absolutely o.k. to keep the conversation going for the rhythms sake and you might learn something(raking furrowed rows, planting seeds)

zodiac 6-Feb-04/7:22 AM
Were you interrupted while writing this (prhaps by one of the eponymous high-jumps)? What you have is rather good in a fitter-happier sort of way, but it breaks off really, really abruptly and unsatisfyingly. So we dont necessarily read poetry to be satisfied, you say. Buncombe, I say. -8-




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