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Free verse № 73227

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Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Nov 2003 · 1 comment

looking for a certain sound effect maybe like water dripping bloop-bloop-bloop but really its the sound of a plate spinning on top of a pin that scccwhooo that just keeps going never ever stops yeah thats the one or just a long distance relationship with someone right beside me, its definately that too and fresh eyes like boot heels on hardwood floor (and its still cold outside, cold outside, cold outside

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[7] horus8 2-Nov-03/8:42 PM Reply
You think it's cold now? Wait until you come in.