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recorded message (Free verse) by A. Nomaly

looking for a certain sound effect maybe like water dripping bloop-bloop-bloop but really its the sound of a plate spinning on top of a pin that scccwhooo that just keeps going never ever stops yeah thats the one or just a long distance relationship with someone right beside me, its definately that too and fresh eyes like boot heels on hardwood floor (and its still cold outside, cold outside, cold outside

horus8 2-Nov-03/8:42 PM
You think it's cold now? Wait until you come in.




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