on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 11:35 AM
cheater.
on Come Night time by anitawit
27 Nov 2002, 1:23 PM
dripping trees and night, do not a death matrix make. 7. very ahh. drippy?
on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~>
27 Nov 2002, 5:41 PM
"hells, not me," was the pinnacle of this cap, is it, yes i believe that was a cap on someone..hmmmmmmm. your not a dumbass. you're a compass, and jeff bridges from starman all at the same time.o
on IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD by little_angel_maria
27 Nov 2002, 2:30 PM
here, let me help you...take your bike seat and 90 degree it...there..that's better..now let's see if we can't get you to ride without your training wheels soon.3.
on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT
27 Nov 2002, 1:48 PM
under greying skys. 7.
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 11:27 AM
Ice-winged, she hides
Mrs. bi-valve, wasteful; but she
will not get her pearl.
Mrs. bi-valve, wasteful; but she
will not get her pearl.
on Damn chickens by ciantu
26 Nov 2002, 11:34 AM
did you know that the komodo dragon can run up to thirty miles per hour, and has acidic bacterial infested saliva? better forget about the pickle and hide your chickens. Because breakfast sucks without eggs. take an 8.
on two poles are better than one by <~>
26 Nov 2002, 11:40 AM
end with "fine" or "be", probably "be" is stronger or maybe, and then we'll see (as an added line) ah fuckit...it just left me a little wet in the vagina (blue balled) but mayhaps was the point 8.
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 11:53 AM
muddled and aloof.6.
on health cards by slipping
26 Nov 2002, 12:01 PM
cool and calculated...a real savy tournequette. 9.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 11:28 AM
great haiku. your title is borderline redundant not to mention also apparently thrown to the wind. such a waste...should be something like "how to blind a bully" or "turnaround and close your eyes". take a 6. poor old man.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 11:32 AM
i would lose the () at the end kiddy fiddler...otherwise this is sheer genius.
on Summer Repose by jdsnyd
22 Nov 2002, 6:05 PM
this is lovely, surely...no one wants to read it though because of the title..see how everyone is avoiding it? that's because they assume they know what its about because of the title. try something like jet streams or the santa annas...indian summer, indian breeze. who knows...all i know is no ones biting your hook. here's an eight for your wait.8.
on some deleted poem
22 Nov 2002, 12:56 PM
touching.7.m
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 11:28 AM
phish show?
on A load of bollocks - literally!!! by Yardbird
22 Nov 2002, 12:58 PM
jackass. try hurling a midget next time. safer.-
on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT
27 Nov 2002, 2:04 PM
epson salt and elevating the arm with vicadin and taxi reruns should fix you right up.7