Re: do androids dream? by nentwined	28-Apr-04/12:03 PM
I'm assuming that you've read "I, Robot." The poem reminded me of it; if you haven't read it, definitely pick it up. Isaac Asimov picks up that question and a whole slew of others. As for the poem itself, I like how in four short lines you address two key issues: AI and slavery. Well done.
Re: start here by jsd	28-Apr-04/12:00 PM
rather depressing at the end there
Re: The Conqueror Worm by zodiac	28-Apr-04/11:47 AM
actually, Mezcal has the worm in it, not Tequila. other than that i enjoyed the poem until the last two lines, which came as a sudden shift. i don't mind a quick twist, but i liked where the poem was going rather than where it ended up.
Re: something by sk8rs_rule_all	21-Apr-04/12:46 PM
please don't use IM language in poetry... "ur" made me cringe
Re: Crucifixion by Mr Pig	21-Apr-04/12:45 PM
what happened to 5-7-5? 4-7-6 is new to me...
Re: a comment on questions by ggawrysi	21-Apr-04/12:44 PM
...?
Re: War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones	21-Apr-04/12:42 PM
poems are not a good medium for political views... at least in my humble opinion...
Re: a comment on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	20-Apr-04/4:44 PM
sorry, forgot to explain something- i do not actually believe that the poem deserves a zero; i would give it a 7 or 8, not really sure which, but you get the idea.
Re: Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	20-Apr-04/4:40 PM
kind of lame that someone (?) had to go to a bunch of computers at a computer station and "anonymously" vote 10 (check the IP addresses, they're all sharing a port). i feel obligated to give a zero as a balancing force.
Re: questions by ggawrysi	20-Apr-04/3:14 PM
this is one of the more confusing dialogues i've read lately...
Re: innocent voyeur by nentwined	20-Apr-04/1:59 AM
i don't think that "passed" should have its own line... it's not an action word like "interact." otherwise i like it, last line and all
Re: From Treehouse To Factory by Shardik	19-Apr-04/3:23 PM
S4 had the most powerful imagery in the poem, I definitely enjoyed it. Very well done; every word adds something to the poem, there's no fluff anywhere.
Re: a comment on The Robin- A Parody by ggawrysi	19-Apr-04/3:20 PM
no crap, i was being sarcastic... note the dry nature of my comment.
Re: a comment on The Robin- A Parody by ggawrysi	19-Apr-04/3:16 PM
Believe me, I liked The Raven better too; I don't pretend to be able to match or better Poe by any extent. I simply enjoy a little comedy, and if I gave you a chuckle than my goal was completed.
Re: a comment on The Robin- A Parody by ggawrysi	19-Apr-04/9:27 AM
so much insight... i'm so happy that you took the time to read this poem and tell me what you think!
Re: The Robin- A Parody by ggawrysi	18-Apr-04/11:05 PM
Sorry if anyone read this before I fixed a couple typos. Also apologizing for the format; it looked much better in MSWord :-) Each stanza should have six lines, with a couple of five line stanzas. The last line is meant to sit alone.
Re: Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco	18-Apr-04/10:56 PM
the problem with writing down lyrics is that, more often than not, it doesn't flow for the reader without a tune behind it. could you write in a tab chart to go along with it? no vote from me; lyrics take on a completely different meaning when put to music.
Re: Riding High On My Ignore List by horus8	18-Apr-04/10:54 PM
it's weaker than your past stuff... i just finished reading about a dozen of your past poems. there's no real point, and the fact that it starts with an AIM reference turned me off. if the whole poem had been about a messenging service it would have a lot of potential.
Re: Metametahaiku by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	18-Apr-04/10:51 PM
cute in a middle school kind of way
Re: Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac	18-Apr-04/10:36 PM
Did you know that Foucault's first book was the "History of Sexuality?" Leave it to a French philosopher.