| Re: a comment on Lips no longer innocent by tre |
15-May-04/5:37 AM |
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| Re: Blinking by zodiac |
14-Apr-04/6:05 PM |
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got a kick out of the second to last line :)
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| Re: Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
13-Apr-04/6:26 PM |
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good job expressing the emotions, this is amazing
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| Re: Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
13-Apr-04/6:07 PM |
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| Re: lost memories by ggawrysi |
11-Apr-04/10:51 PM |
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i hate to go along with the crowd, but u deserved a 10...u surprised me. good job.
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| Re: self indulgent teenage-style poem needed to spew out. by Roisin |
11-Apr-04/10:48 PM |
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ive been thru this exactly. good job.
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| Re: short clip about dc, #2 by jsd |
11-Apr-04/10:41 PM |
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| Re: My Day Off by wilco |
11-Apr-04/7:22 PM |
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awesome poem, i love the line about zodiaz, he keeps pullin down my poems ;( keep it up, and dont forget to read mine
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| Re: a comment on Cabbagetown will miss you by tre |
8-Apr-04/12:53 AM |
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i fixed the three's to Three's, had to. anyways crazy, this IS more prose, but thats how i wanted to write it, a eulogy if u will....i can see how i could make it better for a better poem, thanks anyway B....good critique, ..except for the part where u tried to rewrite my entire stanza!
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| Re: The Girl With the Tye-Dyed Hair by wilco |
6-Apr-04/12:14 PM |
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u got some guts, again, a great poem
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| Re: Don't Cry, Sharon Tate by wilco |
6-Apr-04/12:12 PM |
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I love it, crazy story huh?
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| Re: a comment on Over you by tre |
5-Apr-04/9:18 PM |
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what the hell is that supposed to mean?
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| Re: july by jsd |
5-Apr-04/12:02 AM |
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i loved it :)....a lot of really great lines, and I cant wait to hear it as a song
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| Re: To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
2-Apr-04/12:24 PM |
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then what are we supposed to write about?
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| Re: Search Engine by OneFingerAnswer |
2-Apr-04/9:06 AM |
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| Re: I wish... by Jai |
2-Apr-04/9:04 AM |
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i get it completely, simple though
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| Re: I hope not by colndodg |
2-Apr-04/9:03 AM |
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| Re: First move by aliena |
2-Apr-04/8:59 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Cargo pants by tre |
2-Apr-04/8:54 AM |
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thanks :) thats all i want to do..reach people with my life...look forward to reading some of yours
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| Re: scabs by Crakyamuni |
30-Mar-04/12:52 PM |
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reminds me of an old friendship that went to hell
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