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july (Free verse) by jsd
all this time spent waiting for the good souls
searching for those whoâll kick back and hum along to the rock + roll
those who make this world just enough
this worldâs not nearly enough
and I could think of much better
pale yellow stars, hot orange fires
lining the sky with high wires
and no one carves names in to trees anymore
we trace them in the sand, to be washed down shore
when Iâm feeling nothing
I just remember july
when you were saving my life
saying we werenât born just to die
we werenât born to fade away
and youâre still what all my mistakes are forâ¦
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.375
Weighted score: 5.638736
Overall Rank: 2161
Posted: March 30, 2004 5:09 PM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2004 5:09 PM PST
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