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lost memories (Other) by ggawrysi
foray into me
the birds chirp, my eyes see
spring in the doorway,
winter's short stay,
lost memories behind me.
but then who was she?
a bitter taste, half nine past three
confusing anecdotes,
inhaled through a pack of smokes,
my mind like a gnarled tree.
was it the booze?
the weed in the piece?
a bad batch of shrooms?
the cocaine K-9 police?
my mind has thus left me
a photo here, what's left to see
home movie paradise,
camera catching gleaming eyes,
the remote sits on my knee.
there the lost memory
the volume low, my eyes see
summer left for fall,
blankets of brown leaves sprawl,
lost memories behind me.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.6153846
Weighted score: 6.911999
Overall Rank: 219
Posted: April 11, 2004 9:59 PM PDT; Last modified: April 11, 2004 10:05 PM PDT
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