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lost memories (Other) by ggawrysi
foray into me the birds chirp, my eyes see spring in the doorway, winter's short stay, lost memories behind me. but then who was she? a bitter taste, half nine past three confusing anecdotes, inhaled through a pack of smokes, my mind like a gnarled tree. was it the booze? the weed in the piece? a bad batch of shrooms? the cocaine K-9 police? my mind has thus left me a photo here, what's left to see home movie paradise, camera catching gleaming eyes, the remote sits on my knee. there the lost memory the volume low, my eyes see summer left for fall, blankets of brown leaves sprawl, lost memories behind me.

Up the ladder: Happiness & Old Age
Down the ladder: Grandpa's boat

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 7.193176
Overall Rank: 24
Posted: April 11, 2004 9:59 PM PDT; Last modified: April 11, 2004 10:05 PM PDT
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[10] jsd @ 147.9.165.67 | 11-Apr-04/10:29 PM | Reply
Beautiful.
[n/a] ggawrysi @ 147.9.151.22 > jsd | 11-Apr-04/10:38 PM | Reply
thank you
[10] Tara57 @ 147.9.40.112 | 11-Apr-04/10:41 PM | Reply
I love you...this poem is beautiful
[10] tre @ 147.9.40.139 | 11-Apr-04/10:51 PM | Reply
i hate to go along with the crowd, but u deserved a 10...u surprised me. good job.
[6] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 12-Apr-04/12:55 PM | Reply
Quite the American University fan club you've got going there ggawrysi.
[10] jsd @ 147.9.165.67 > Shuushin | 12-Apr-04/4:06 PM | Reply
Does ggawrysi go to AU? I came across this poem of his using the "random" feature. Huh. Interesting.
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