Re: devil by pitchblackdisaster |
19-Aug-02/6:27 AM |
you make no sense please exsplain more clearly.
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Re: fear by pitchblackdisaster |
19-Aug-02/1:40 AM |
zzinnia you must be realy clever because you are able to spot mistakes people are making and stuff like that where did you get it all from? your brilliant.
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Re: "On My Love" by Blake |
18-Aug-02/7:11 AM |
i love this poem i think its brilliant.
i think other people dont see true beauty when they look at your poems.but i do
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Re: sky by youngweirdo |
18-Aug-02/5:25 AM |
what the fuck?
i swear man your poems are fucked up.
what sort of shit is goin on in that head of yours mann?
oh and what the hell happened to the first I? is it meant to be there or what?
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Re: fear by pitchblackdisaster |
17-Aug-02/6:07 PM |
thanks for the advice blake.
sounds like horus8 has been dissin everyone at the moment.
nearly every comment he gives it is always bad.i think he needs to look at his own poems before he starts dissin ours dont you think so?
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Re: A Voice Found by Blake |
17-Aug-02/6:01 PM |
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Re: fear by pitchblackdisaster |
17-Aug-02/5:54 PM |
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Re: fear by pitchblackdisaster |
17-Aug-02/9:07 AM |
i am 14.what do you mean by the rest of the stuff that you said.do a search for what?
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Re: fear by pitchblackdisaster |
17-Aug-02/8:24 AM |
i dont understand any fucking thing that you guies have been sayin could you please refraise what you just wrote in the way you would if you was sayin it to a child please 4 me.
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Re: odd star by pitchblackdisaster |
17-Aug-02/8:21 AM |
i am only young i am still in school for gods sake so dont give me a lecture on punctuation cos ive had enough of it from my bastard teachers.and as for angels i would be glad to let you have the pleasure to skin me alive cos i dont realy care anymore ok?
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Re: devil by pitchblackdisaster |
17-Aug-02/8:15 AM |
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Re: I SHALL NOT by pitchblackdisaster |
17-Aug-02/8:14 AM |
what the fuck r u on about?
i dont understand?
and yes i am dumb before you say i am.
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Re: Unfinished by Blake |
16-Aug-02/11:51 AM |
shear brilliance.
this poem really grabbed my heart and i suppose you are a romantic man and im sure it is not just old farts that like your work i am probbably one of the youngest people on poemranker and i like your work alot and im sure it means allot to you and doesnt desserve to be dissed as it has been from what i have read.
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Re: dorm life by unknown |
16-Aug-02/11:29 AM |
verry surprizin and yet somewhat brilliant i like it but i dont get where the title came from
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Re: Advice Given On Drama by Blake |
16-Aug-02/11:27 AM |
i think all the other comments given are selfish and ignorrant and i think you should think twice before writing comments because no matter how good or bad a poem is it still deserves praise and i think given the title of this poem as the subject blake has done quite well for himself on this one. i like it.so think twice before setting out to hurt someones feelings.and well done blake!!!!!! you outsmarted them.
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Re: fear by pitchblackdisaster |
16-Aug-02/11:16 AM |
good idea maybe i should re write it because i have other things that i could add to it to.and no it isnt about that....but it could be if u wanted it to
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Re: odd star by pitchblackdisaster |
16-Aug-02/11:13 AM |
why send it off to disney? im sure that all they would do is just look at it strangely and then take my age into their thaughts and think that i am weird.
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Re: Summer Day by Tekara |
16-Aug-02/10:43 AM |
nice one i like that poem its very good and happy!!!!!!
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Re: Shadow by javelinne |
16-Aug-02/10:37 AM |
verry whell done and whatever was going on in your mind must have been very strong willed for you to come out with such exspressed words
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Re: Vigor Mortis by WarrenGDawg |
15-Aug-02/1:59 PM |
woah you must be one with the ladies with all that talk.you are brilliant,amazing i cant believe what i have just read it is too good the words used are just too perfect and they fit in this poem amazingly
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