Lyric № 3235

Shadow

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

A raging fire dies away The icy rain wipes my tears away Then my frozen feet gave way Weak and jaded, so here I stay Candles only flicker in the wind And so are the feathers on a wing Flowers only sway in a gust Their petals shimmer and blush And I am but a shadow A forlorn silhouette, not a single glow Disappears in the dark Until another light sparks

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[7] horus8 11-Jul-02/6:15 PM Reply

life is seen clearer from the shade$

[7] pitchblackdisaster 16-Aug-02/10:37 AM Reply

verry whell done and whatever was going on in your mind must have been very strong willed for you to come out with such exspressed words