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Tanka (Free verse) by Service The ferns shade our walk
The cool air energises
We take the long track
Our bodies close through loves warmth
We're lifted again.
Up the ladder:
Shadow
Down the ladder:
WorkingDream
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Posted: July 7, 2002 3:57 PM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2002 3:57 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.55 Overall Rank: 12697 Comments:
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<~> @ 167.206.181.179
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30-Aug-02/7:44 AM
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sweet. pure. so very necessary.
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