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Shadow (Lyric) by javelinne

A raging fire dies away The icy rain wipes my tears away Then my frozen feet gave way Weak and jaded, so here I stay Candles only flicker in the wind And so are the feathers on a wing Flowers only sway in a gust Their petals shimmer and blush And I am but a shadow A forlorn silhouette, not a single glow Disappears in the dark Until another light sparks

pitchblackdisaster 16-Aug-02/10:37 AM
verry whell done and whatever was going on in your mind must have been very strong willed for you to come out with such exspressed words




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