regarding some deleted poem... |
25-May-04/7:06 AM |
When you get to Hell, say hello to Satan for me, will you?
-1- (for effort)
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Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
19-May-05/11:42 AM |
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Re: I Remembered, Upon Waking by Alizarin_Crimson |
20-May-05/1:05 PM |
I do not feel, presently, like explaining myself. *7*
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Re: The Prayer Vendor by Enkidu |
12-Jan-06/10:31 PM |
I despise using dictionaries and thesauri unless I'm looking up the spelling of a word. By the way, a deprecation is a sort of prayer. Also, I used deil's (the devil's) smiles as a metaphor for the people who the Vendor makes suffer.
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Re: Cry by Sunny |
27-Apr-06/8:35 PM |
Not bad, I loved the line breaks. *8*
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Re: Deja Vu by sliver |
27-Apr-06/8:36 PM |
I have too agree with Dovina, no real substance. Not worth remembering. *6*
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regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Apr-06/8:38 PM |
AHH! This is much worse than it should be, even so, I really enjoyed it. *8*
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Re: FISH by annadoc |
27-Apr-06/8:40 PM |
Eh...I hate wishing I skipped a very mediocre poem, sorry. *5*
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Re: To Brittany by amanda_dcosta |
27-Apr-06/8:42 PM |
I think "cherub" is a bit out of place, nonetheless, this is pretty good. I especially liked the second stanza. *8*
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Re: Tang Soo Do See Do by ecargo |
27-Apr-06/8:43 PM |
Very original, very good. I was thoroughly entertained. *9*
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Re: First Warm Day on Santa Barbara Bay by Dovina |
27-Apr-06/8:46 PM |
Solid title, solid poem, 'nuff said.*8*
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Re: Fraser's Wedding by Stephen Robins |
27-Apr-06/8:48 PM |
What a happy ending...*9*
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regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Apr-06/8:50 PM |
Stanza two is just raw poetry, I love how refined your style is...I know it contradicts...hah. *9*
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Re: one by Adriaan |
27-Apr-06/8:52 PM |
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Re: one by Adriaan |
27-Apr-06/8:52 PM |
Not my chalice of wine. *6*
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Re: 99% of the Time by TLRufener |
27-Apr-06/8:54 PM |
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Re: Euclidian Insanity by tryplsyted |
27-Apr-06/9:02 PM |
This could be more polished, but chances are it wouldn't be nearly as good. Loved the title, love the poem, kudos. *10*
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regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Apr-06/10:03 AM |
Well that was horribly annoying. But since everybody got one I feel special now. Oh, once you settle down a little, copy/paste was definitely the way to go in poem insults.
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Re: Forest by the Sea by Dovina |
3-Aug-06/12:56 PM |
Not bad, the last verse could be a little stronger, but i like the idea a lot.
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Re: A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove |
3-Aug-06/4:44 PM |
from Mac, Enk, and D. to you, Edna, this comes with love.
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