Re: Plastic Explosive Iraqi-Man by Enkidu	5-Apr-04/9:21 PM
Sorry, castless should be cast-e-less. But the current meaning could be interpreted as if the world was devoid of people, or its "cast."
Re: One or the Same by Enkidu	16-Apr-04/7:38 AM
If you figure it out, please say so and I will go to your first poem and comment if you're right.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Apr-04/7:46 AM
"LIKE old folks?" Does this imply that the narrator doesn't consider themself aged? This question only applies if the narrator is, in fact, old.
Re: One or the Same by Enkidu	16-Apr-04/11:45 AM
There once was poet, a cheat Who thought he was good on his feet So he looked and he found That his distance from ground Made he journey to hell most complete (Hee Hee, Ha, Ho, Hah, Ah hah, Heh, Oh ho, *sigh* Not funny)
Re: A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe	26-Apr-04/6:49 AM
And I saideth unto Him "Hurry upeth! You're using all the hot water!" Bathroom 2:14:99
Re: my truth by francis nor capule	25-May-04/6:53 AM
Good pace, very even throughout, except for the first two lines which stutter a bit. S4 L1, 2ps in hapiness. -7-
regarding some deleted poem...	25-May-04/6:57 AM
What do you call something too deep? Ah! Yes, I have found the ABYSS whence many a poem have perished within! -5-
Re: The devils win by firestar_2580	25-May-04/7:01 AM
Spell Check - no Grammar Check - no Content Check - no Why do you even bother, this must have been written in a matter of forty-five seconds. My shitty comment took longer than that. -2-
regarding some deleted poem...	25-May-04/7:04 AM
Great, biting end. Excelling imagery. Greetings from MacFan -9- *10*(He's really into animals)