Re: a comment on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco	7-Jun-04/2:19 PM
Oh, then all is forgiven.
Re: a comment on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco	7-Jun-04/2:15 PM
I can't say I'm in total disagreement with what you say. There hasn't been a country song that I've liked in at least 8-10 years, but the old songs by Cash, Nelson, Hank and even Garth Brooks are definitely good.
Re: Hollywierd by INTRANSIT	7-Jun-04/2:00 PM
Started out good, but yes, not as good toward the end..
Re: a comment on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco	6-Jun-04/7:59 PM
now, that's not nice.
Re: a comment on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco	6-Jun-04/7:57 PM
I've read several of yours and you are pretty good at writing lyrics. The biggest problem I've seen with some of them is the structure. That's pretty easily fixed though, when you put the words to music. It's all about editing when you get to that stage. You can tell the ones of mine that I wrote with a guitar and the ones I wrote...just writing. The ones I wrote w/o using a guitar don't flow nearly as well. As far as the lyrics go though, not too shabby.
Re: a comment on Silly Get by DR Limerick	6-Jun-04/8:16 AM
Allow me to explain this to you. Looking at your voting history, I can see that you have voted on...a grand total of 9 poems. How can you expect other people to read and vote on yours if you won't read and vote on theirs?
Re: Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco	5-Jun-04/4:02 PM
Just thought I'd try my hand at a country song (I do live in Tennessee, after all).
Re: a comment on Heaven Out Here by wilco	4-Jun-04/12:21 PM
That's a good point. The only part of your statement that's wrong is that "Christians are thick because they don't believe in Muslim." It was not my intent to say that. They're thick for a lot of reasons, but this isn't one. People are free to believe what they wish, but I don't think that they should push their beliefs onto me. I don't presume to tell anyone else what to believe and I simply ask that people don't try to tell me what to believe. I realize that they believe they are doing a good thing when they do so, but that is beside the point. Also, just to clarify (and you probably don't care), but I'm not a Muslim either. ...and Zodiac, would you like to send me a check, money order, or use paypal for my 5 dollars?
Re: a comment on Heaven Out Here by wilco	3-Jun-04/7:48 PM
Ok, as I said, I bet you can tell me what my purpose here is. First, you are the shallow one, my friend. The reason is that you presume to tell me the purpose of my own life. I don't post comments on your poems telling you that you're shallow for your beliefs. Second, you are assuming that I'm a Christian...which I am not. So, please take your religious propaganda elsewhere and let me believe what I wish. ...and I know....i'm going to hell. Just thought I'd say it before you did. So, sit back and lambast the Muslims because of a few zealots, drink your cocoa, and have a good evening. Thanks, Wilco
Re: a comment on Heaven Out Here by wilco	3-Jun-04/2:00 PM
I suppose it would have been less shallow, had I written something about how I have some huge impact on the world. In all seriousness, I don't know why God put me here...but I'm willing to bet that you could tell me. It's just about enjoying all the beauty that is the Earth, you nincompoop.
Re: Jimmy and Chichi Choo (Sub-Dylan Bullshit Blues) by the codeine kid	2-Jun-04/2:03 PM
It does sound kind of like some of Dylans writing...Somethings not quite right though...I'm not sure what it is...I'll have to think.
Re: STEP 4 by the codeine kid	2-Jun-04/2:02 PM
I liked it up until the very last line.
Re: dancing on air by killingjuliet	1-Jun-04/5:38 PM
Nice, but I agree that you should drop the magical mystery part.
Re: The Bed by Fear of Garbage	28-May-04/12:12 PM
Are you really only 16? You don't see many teenagers that can write this well. Keep it up.
Re: a comment on I love you by AskittlesK	28-May-04/12:02 PM
He is a monster....just a cuddly one.
Re: Get it straight by tre	27-May-04/4:15 PM
That is sort of.....Zappaesque?
Re: a comment on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha	25-May-04/8:42 PM
I don't see how translating something makes it yours....So, if I'm in school and I translate a thesis written in Japanese to English.....it's not plagiarism? You're going to have to explain this one a little better.
Re: a comment on Catharsis by wilco	22-May-04/12:44 PM
interpretation is ever'ting, my good man.
Re: a comment on Catharsis by wilco	22-May-04/12:43 PM
The way I understand it, the last line must be identical to the second line, which I why it is what it is.
Re: a comment on Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17	21-May-04/7:02 PM
well, good job.