Re: Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	23-Feb-03/12:01 AM
Have you seen Z. She did not go to that Great White concert did she? she is a metal chic, you know. Where was it. The news here is piss poor.
Re: Crucifixion by Mr Pig	10-Mar-03/10:11 PM
Profound!! Genius!! Sure it is. Look up the haiku!!
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Mar-03/10:14 PM
Whatever.
Re: Sure-it-fits! {haiku*series} by <{Baba^Yaga}>	10-Mar-03/10:16 PM
I see after a month and a half you still write like shit! Such originality in writing that way though! Good job, dickhead!
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Mar-03/10:19 PM
I thought you were gone for good. That was the message that was delivered to me. I spent a month wandering the Pacific in a leaky boat broken hearted all because of you. And now, you come back! To be damned. Newfies are so fickle!
Re: The Innocent by wLeBlanc IIIw	10-Mar-03/10:22 PM
Seas of blood is goofy. The incessant repetition is goofy. The reference to Bob Marley is goofy. Why are you leblank #3. That is goofy!
Re: A God Upon This Earth by WHeYe	10-Mar-03/10:23 PM
The first line ruined everything!
Re: Stand in line for nothingness by Crakyamuni	10-Mar-03/10:28 PM
You really do not have a clue as to what you are trying to say, do you?
Re: Family Portrait by Mr Pig	10-Mar-03/10:31 PM
A poor attempt at imitating Dark Angel while still sounding like the goof of a poet cadacus! Crap all around!
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Mar-03/10:36 PM
this fleshing out of e-liaison-- find something better! Find another word for disarmed. bled me, -- I still do not understand this, but I am will to try! It sounds kinky! I think you have finally knocked out the ending. Now, no more of the bullshit that you are not writing or struggling with writer's block. There is no such thing. Sometimes we just have to work harder.
Re: this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub	10-Mar-03/10:39 PM
Big words, decent flow, fine images, but the poem feels a bit forced. Like a generic observation. But, I am drunk so don't mind me.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Mar-03/10:46 PM
Trust me, five blue tens does not make this poem any better than a litter box full of cat pooh. It is horrible, through and through! But congrats on the high rating and the top 15 spot. You are the Barbara Courtland of poem ranker!
Re: Waiting to exit by INTRANSIT	10-Mar-03/10:52 PM
Some good, some bad. Think about the metaphor you are trying to create and the expound on it. It is not as if it is an easy thing to do. If you want to be a good writer, you have to pour over your work.to make sure everything is connected. Make sure it all makes sense. Just ask DA.
Re: Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos	10-Mar-03/10:55 PM
Another in the long line of "I am misunderstood, really this is genius" crap you write. Dude, Stan Rice is dead. It is yours for the taking!!!!!!!!
Re: Something for Lynn by Jeremi B. Handrinos	10-Mar-03/11:00 PM
Oh lynn, give me that fucking blankey before I go nuts on you. I am super tough you know. hahahahahah.
Re: PC by NewbieMe	10-Mar-03/11:03 PM
Really, are you serious or just a misguided four-year-old who has access to mommy's computer for 15 minutes a day?
Re: The System by LeBlank II	10-Mar-03/11:08 PM
Great use of cheese ball rhyme. This is like a techno pimple poem! Why are you lablank ! !! and !!!? Did you really think we need to read all of these fantastic poems at once and could not wait a week for more? Oh baby, give me more. I want Leblank IV.
Re: Three Pennies of Garbage by babyBOOMER	10-Mar-03/11:10 PM
I refuse to vote on any of your poems until you tell me what Z looks like naked playing the fiddle. Write a poem about that!
Re: Those Crazy's people in my brainsky by Shardik	11-Mar-03/8:23 AM
Odd images all around and interesting use of grammar in places, but that in no matter to the daring and original, those who now must fill the cancer-ridden shoes of Stan Rice.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Mar-03/8:30 AM
Macabre and yet a satisfying image.