Re: Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal	11-Sep-02/9:38 PM
I swear I read this the first time when it was called Waking Up. Why don't you just make the one poem? Or maybe that wasn't what it was called, but it was another angry rant. Doesn't feeling hurt suck? Man, dude I feel it. Freakin women. Don't call her though!! Don't!!
Re: A missing puzzle piece. by trev086	11-Sep-02/9:48 PM
Oh brother must we continue to read these poor poems. But it gets Frass' Sad Sap approval award!!
Re: Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	11-Sep-02/9:49 PM
3am is the loneliest hour to shower.
Re: Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	11-Sep-02/9:53 PM
The definitely gets the Cupping GW award for the night. She is off with Clement, so I guess I am stuck with you. I actually have a friend going through a similar thing as you....
Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	12-Sep-02/8:45 AM
You cannot actually have a brain you are a small minded individual with no thought to people who actually are ill. Sick. YUCK! BLECH! GAG!:( This is sick and sad. You are a narrow minded prick. You say we should be praying for these sick people, you should pray for them instead of preying on them, making there illness a joke, you are seriously going to offend someone with the disease, or someone with a family member that has it. Make a joke that is funny not sick. What the hell is your problem. You are the first one to dogg someone elsa's poem, and they're actually wrighting about somthing for a cause or that means somthing to them, you are writing just to frustrate and offend people with. I dont know about everyone elsa, I can't speak for them but i want you off this website.
Re: Gone Away by Christof	12-Sep-02/8:55 AM
Just think if you outlive her the choices you will have. The old folks homes have 4/1 ration of women to men!!!! Excellent last stanza. And no flipping birds.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Sep-02/10:18 AM
Is this to me? I am so flattered you took the time to get out the dictionary and think of me. It is much more of an honor than having a simple smile from a writer of pimple poems. Shouldn???t you be in school or is it recess? love p&k
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Sep-02/8:29 PM
Damn. This is good. I do not like this line: Reaching through murky depths of life, alone. And I think there is a typo - surface for surgace, but good stuff. When are you going to post something new? Ah yes, young and spry out gathering experience. I need something new lemonade.
Re: fairy tale by jlanza	12-Sep-02/8:34 PM
Why the one comma? You didn't bother to use punctuation anywhere else. And the last line is clumsy with the typo. Might want to get that.
Re: deluge by kawakurdi	12-Sep-02/8:39 PM
Like the beginning, especially the first line and dig the ending, but let out a big yawn in the middle. Maybe it is the adjectives you incorporate in your poetry that bother me, but then again maybe I just do not understand this type of poetry because of the culture I live in.
Re: Lysander cried by bornagainpoet	12-Sep-02/8:58 PM
Are you equating yourself with a tough guy Spartan?
Re: We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass	13-Sep-02/8:36 AM
Funny or goofy? Hmmm. that is a tough one. Any way biker Frass, lol, 52 weeks a year. Did you visit the girls specifically or did you just happen to be on the veranda and visit "with" them. The nervous laughter and looks makes me think this is spontaneous which throws the title out of context and bothers me. Plus, it sounds just trite. Is this like the first time you have ever encountered anybody outside of your shell. I bet you just love seeing boys in lycra, muscles bulging, sweat pouring, pounding Gary Fisher pedals 52 weeks a year. ummm. Yummy. When I cum out to VA will you be my bitch?
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-02/8:41 AM
Another tribute poem for me!!
Re: Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	13-Sep-02/8:44 AM
Why the .... Sexy and I like the last line.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-02/8:48 AM
It is the poem a day by Christof!! I just don't like the images. Don't know why. I just can't image relief spreading like leaves. I want to make it something it is not. But oh well. There is always tomorrow's poem.
Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom	13-Sep-02/9:16 AM
Who's God? Because I kind of look like my Mom and Pops. well hopefully more my mom but as I get older I see my dad, ugh. He was ugly, you know. So are they god? Well my daughters look a bit like me, although my fist one is probably a mutt considering my ex slept with, well she probably even slept with you doug. So, am I god? Wow. You know them CHRISTians are pretty wacky themselves.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-02/9:18 AM
Suddenly this poem came upon me and the lonesome thing made me so lonely for something besides this rubbish heap of words.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-02/9:19 AM
what is the point of this stupidity?
Re: Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	13-Sep-02/10:34 AM
i revoted.
Re: HELP by LIL ZAY	13-Sep-02/10:37 AM
Hey, who gave this a 0. I kind of like it, minus the caps, but maybe he is hard of hearing from the mortar fire.