Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
5-Aug-02/11:17 AM |
I don't think the issue is necessarily whether or not people would care about "who she screwed", but rather whether or not it was a married Dolphin man or not. That and the fact that it's generally an old, overdone sentiment that has been done much better in the past. No offense of course: one can't write a love song and expect it to be particularily interesting or original (unless it's about loving Dolphins), and I'd think the same goes for poetry.
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Re: Existence by ThoughtfulSoul |
5-Aug-02/11:11 AM |
No, both those things are like existing. It's the existance known as AGONY, and it's quite common to some people. Are you so naive to think that all existence should be bright and rosy, or would you just rather not think about the starving children making your Nike shoes in China right now?
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Re: My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z |
5-Aug-02/11:07 AM |
This haiku is a heartwrenching, emotional tale about how Prince was much cooler before he started using all those weird symbols and before he brought Jesus into his live act.
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Re: Hot Maid by Agemo-Z |
5-Aug-02/11:03 AM |
Yeah, well, this is intended to be more on the side of subtle humour than erotica. But isn't it funny how "poem" in italics looks like P-O-E-R-N, or phonetically "porn"?
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Re: My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z |
5-Aug-02/11:00 AM |
Why'd ya have to bring HIM into this? This was a nice haiku about Prince, who brought us such great hits as "When Doves Cry" and "Raspberry Berret", but you have to taint it by mentioning HIM. *sigh*
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Re: The King's Assassin by Twisted Wizard |
5-Aug-02/12:37 AM |
I dunno man... Sure, it was that line that made me think that, but the ensuing violence in the song made me think of such classics as "The Four Horsemen" and "Creeping Death", while the dour tone at the end brought forth memories of "Fade to Black" and "the Unforgiven".
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Re: The King's Assassin by Twisted Wizard |
5-Aug-02/12:13 AM |
These sound like they should be old Metallica lyrics.
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Re: School girls lovely school girls by ==Doylum |
5-Aug-02/12:02 AM |
Good point, Darky (you don't mind if I call you that, do you?), although some of the current Japanese schoolgirls are becoming somewhat more modern, with dyed hair (it's hip in Japan to have blonde hair now, presumeably because it makes one appear more American) and glitter. But that's not quite up to the level of spiked collar and purple hair.
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Re: Santa Ana, California by bondjedi |
4-Aug-02/11:57 PM |
How'bout "Born again Christian \ Think I'll make one more baby \ Hope it's not a jew" ?
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Re: "to do" list:accomplished by razorgrin |
4-Aug-02/11:43 PM |
I think "fire" has two syllables. Unless you're from Texas. Did I spell that right? Syllables? I hope I did.
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Re: Colorado by Voth269 |
4-Aug-02/11:27 PM |
Yeah, "razorgrin" is the one who brought me here, and her boyfriend and I were the one who brought her into the wild world of D&D.
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Re: Hot Maid by Agemo-Z |
4-Aug-02/11:25 PM |
Well, this IS a Maid fantasy, so she has to be prudish and delicate. And I had to make kinky use of cleaning utensils somehow. Dusters are totally hot.
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Re: Why Should I Care by DolphnLvr82 |
4-Aug-02/10:47 PM |
Is the "big leap" in this poem telling someone that you love them? Or is it... you know... doing it? And is it about a dolphin?
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Re: School girls lovely school girls by ==Doylum |
4-Aug-02/10:33 PM |
That touched me somewhere dear.
I think it was my wee-wee.
Didn't think the 2nd verse was quite as good as the others though. Better euphamisms could be had regarding gym knickers and "P.E.".
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Re: a way by flatliner |
4-Aug-02/10:17 PM |
I'm not sure if this is clever or... unclever. But you lose points for your lack of capital letters and proper punctuation. 'Cause I'm a dick with that stuff.
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Re: Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi |
4-Aug-02/10:17 PM |
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Re: Tall can of Budweiser by bondjedi |
4-Aug-02/10:15 PM |
Ahh, the haiku. Beautiful.
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Re: Colorado by Voth269 |
4-Aug-02/10:12 PM |
Oh, I title that "Fiendfolio".
And "plants" doesn't rhyme with "past", Vothy.
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Re: Colorado by Voth269 |
4-Aug-02/10:10 PM |
Eye-rays that disintegrate and fill with disease,
And they also allow for the beholder to see.
Out of the river the troglodytes jump out,
Bringing swift death to Gwen from No Doubt.
The mountains look so tame yet so wild,
Filled with the giants that fathered my child.
The contrast of colors from my prismatic blast,
Are not quite enough to stop the raging Tarrasque!
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