on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 1:45 AM
I want you to cheer up a bit. Jeez.
on My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z
6 Aug 2002, 12:59 AM
Here's a sequel, written by a friend of mine. "Prince has sexy eyes / His moustache makes me soggy / It makes my doves cry"
on Lonely by DevilTmptrss
7 Aug 2002, 12:03 AM
Heheh, "buttons fly" makes me think that robots are exploding or something.
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 12:36 AM
Semicolon! Woo!
Heh, "mates".
"necroscope" is a nut. His profile says that he's in the ARMY. Can you really trust the opinion of someone who would willingly conscribe themselves to take the lives of other people? I don't think so. Personally I thought the poem had a totally funkadelic "flow" that made me bust my pants and dance all over the place. Totally whack.
"necroscope" is a nut. His profile says that he's in the ARMY. Can you really trust the opinion of someone who would willingly conscribe themselves to take the lives of other people? I don't think so. Personally I thought the poem had a totally funkadelic "flow" that made me bust my pants and dance all over the place. Totally whack.
on Flight of the Samurai by Shin-Bojangles
11 Aug 2002, 2:35 AM
What a totally sweet Samurai. Does he have cool Samurai pants? And what about crazy hair?
on wizard master by beakism
11 Aug 2002, 2:24 AM
You need to play less Warcraft III. Besides, my Gem of Seeing will make it so that my ghouls will rip your little elves to shreds.
on A-Team #2 by Shin-Bojangles
11 Aug 2002, 2:38 AM
A 10 for semicolons. Is that Priest guy a fully fledged member of the A-Team, or was he just in that one "lost in redneck woods" episode? I missed the latino guy with the slick mullet in that one.
on some deleted poem
10 Aug 2002, 11:59 PM
"gsosville" says "this sucks and all you poems suck, you have ZERO talent, how does that fell moron?".
HA!
Hahahahahaha.
Learn to use the English language before you try to insult someone with it. Did you run that one through a spell check or what?
HA!
Hahahahahaha.
Learn to use the English language before you try to insult someone with it. Did you run that one through a spell check or what?
on some deleted poem
11 Aug 2002, 12:04 AM
And "babbit", at least he says more than "that was really nice". Calling something "nice" isn't constructive criticism either.
on My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z
6 Aug 2002, 11:37 PM
Yeah, I guess "odes" are supposed to be long, aren't they? Oh well, I don't like Prince THAT much anyway. I just like When Doves Cry.
on Regrets, No More by writteninskin
7 Aug 2002, 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD. I just saw MC Hammer in some insurance commercial. My god, late night TV is amazing.
writteninskin, did you delete all of your previous poems? I miss adourning.
writteninskin, did you delete all of your previous poems? I miss adourning.
on destinys anguish by Adjudicator
7 Aug 2002, 12:30 AM
Wow, such deep, gritty, dark imagery. I particularily enjoyed "the foaming horses".
But seriously, what's the point here? What are you trying to communicate, other than the fact that you can use a bunch of stupidly dark imagery?
But seriously, what's the point here? What are you trying to communicate, other than the fact that you can use a bunch of stupidly dark imagery?
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 12:43 AM
Why would people vote 1 on THIS? It's GENIUS!
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 1:43 AM
Is this a metaphor for a mob of horny guys lusting over a young virgin girl?
on I Hate You by mytenderrage
5 Aug 2002, 10:22 PM
I guess I just sympathyzed, and thought his fingers could use a rest.
Oh, I forgot to add my own comment. If these feelings (of being "cold and dead") were so "real", how did you get over them in "a little while"?
Oh, I forgot to add my own comment. If these feelings (of being "cold and dead") were so "real", how did you get over them in "a little while"?
on Give me beer! by Agemo-Z
5 Aug 2002, 10:41 PM
Uhmm.... I'm... Honoured? (And it's okay for me to spell "honour" with a "u", I'm Canadian, using the Queen's English)
on My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z
5 Aug 2002, 10:24 PM
horus8, I told Prince you were coming for him and he said he'd Batdance all over your ass, whatever that means.
on some deleted poem
11 Aug 2002, 2:39 AM
I think olives come second to feta cheese.
on some deleted poem
11 Aug 2002, 2:40 AM
I don' need no haikus about yer hemruds.