Re: Colorado by Voth269	4-Aug-02/11:27 PM
Yeah, "razorgrin" is the one who brought me here, and her boyfriend and I were the one who brought her into the wild world of D&D.
Re: "to do" list:accomplished by razorgrin	4-Aug-02/11:43 PM
I think "fire" has two syllables. Unless you're from Texas. Did I spell that right? Syllables? I hope I did.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Aug-02/11:46 PM
UPDATE: I clicked the "Get the Top 10 Most Popular Sites for 'haning'" link from Dictionary.com, and found information on Haninge, Sweden; people with the last name "Haning"; and people who can't spell "hanging"; among other things.
Re: Santa Ana, California by bondjedi	4-Aug-02/11:57 PM
How'bout "Born again Christian \ Think I'll make one more baby \ Hope it's not a jew" ?
Re: School girls lovely school girls by ==Doylum	5-Aug-02/12:02 AM
Good point, Darky (you don't mind if I call you that, do you?), although some of the current Japanese schoolgirls are becoming somewhat more modern, with dyed hair (it's hip in Japan to have blonde hair now, presumeably because it makes one appear more American) and glitter. But that's not quite up to the level of spiked collar and purple hair.
Re: The King's Assassin by Twisted Wizard	5-Aug-02/12:13 AM
These sound like they should be old Metallica lyrics.
Re: The King's Assassin by Twisted Wizard	5-Aug-02/12:37 AM
I dunno man... Sure, it was that line that made me think that, but the ensuing violence in the song made me think of such classics as "The Four Horsemen" and "Creeping Death", while the dour tone at the end brought forth memories of "Fade to Black" and "the Unforgiven".
Re: My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z	5-Aug-02/11:00 AM
Why'd ya have to bring HIM into this? This was a nice haiku about Prince, who brought us such great hits as "When Doves Cry" and "Raspberry Berret", but you have to taint it by mentioning HIM. *sigh*
Re: Hot Maid by Agemo-Z	5-Aug-02/11:03 AM
Yeah, well, this is intended to be more on the side of subtle humour than erotica. But isn't it funny how "poem" in italics looks like P-O-E-R-N, or phonetically "porn"?
Re: My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z	5-Aug-02/11:07 AM
This haiku is a heartwrenching, emotional tale about how Prince was much cooler before he started using all those weird symbols and before he brought Jesus into his live act.
Re: Existence by ThoughtfulSoul	5-Aug-02/11:11 AM
No, both those things are like existing. It's the existance known as AGONY, and it's quite common to some people. Are you so naive to think that all existence should be bright and rosy, or would you just rather not think about the starving children making your Nike shoes in China right now?
Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82	5-Aug-02/11:17 AM
I don't think the issue is necessarily whether or not people would care about "who she screwed", but rather whether or not it was a married Dolphin man or not. That and the fact that it's generally an old, overdone sentiment that has been done much better in the past. No offense of course: one can't write a love song and expect it to be particularily interesting or original (unless it's about loving Dolphins), and I'd think the same goes for poetry.
Re: My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z	5-Aug-02/11:21 AM
The only character I didn't think was reprehensible in War3 was Thrall. He at least TRIED to get along with everyone, but just about everyone else mucks things up. Furion wasn't bad either, but had his moments.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-02/8:06 PM
"Adourning" isn't a word. "nor heaven or hell" doesn't make sense. "A fallen soldier lost in the knight" only makes sense if he fell into a really large man in armor on a horse, or if he was trying to anally violate said horseman. Confessions can't be left "to far verbose", because verbose isn't a noun, it's an adjective. I don't think "fin'lly" was necessary. "Finally" would have sufficed. This is trite.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-02/8:11 PM
Yeah, I'm with Dark Angel, babies totally go to Satan. Was this supposed to rhyme or not?
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-02/8:13 PM
I wasn't trying to be that funny, really. Except maybe for the anal sex reference, since lots of people seem to find that funny. I guess my comment is just about as funny as your nickname, "written in skin".
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-02/8:49 PM
Agemo-Z is an intentionally goofy name, so you can't really make fun of it for sounding funny. I think anyone who calls themselves a "goth" is funnier than most things out there. But it's not funnier than "adourning".
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-02/9:03 PM
Just read your longer comment. SOMEONE needs to chill out, methinks. If the fallen soldier IS the knight, then why, with no other allusions to said soldier being lost inside of himself, AND allusions to a lack of light, or the "night" being present, did you say "a fallen soldier lost in the knight"? Very confusing. And "confessions left to far verbose" SHOULD have been "confessions left far too verbose". Your mistake, not my misinterpretation. I knew that's what you probably meant, but my previous way of pointing out the error was more fun for me.
Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage	5-Aug-02/9:55 PM
From what I have read so far, -=Dark_Angel=- is the best fucking thing that has ever happened to this board. And yeah, he's totally got you beat on the "l33t" name thing, as I believe he was being sarcastic and making fun of his own name. "Felchstraw"... genius! And his point, if it hasn't been driven in before, is the following: This poem is not good. Period. It is not talented poetry. It is trite. These comments are not questionable: they're not just opinions, they're pretty much given as truths. This is a public web page titled "Poemranker". We rank poems at Poemranker. Ranking involves judgement, henceforth it is our duty to judge your poetry. We have judged it, and found it to be not good poetry. His second, and seperate point, is that he's tired of people thinking that this isn't crap, because it is. And, consequently, he's tired of this page being flooded with crappy poetry. It's understandable to get tired of crap every once and a while. Are you tired of country music? Or the Backstreet Boys? If so, you can relate to how -=Dark_Angel=- is feeling. He feels like ranting and insulting people, so that's what he did. So show him a bit of compassion, people! Sweet Jesus. Try to be nice sometimes, and MAYBE he'd be nicer to you. Do onto others as you'd have them do unto you, or something like that.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-02/9:58 PM
So... I'M the "dumb fucker" because YOU can't spell correctly and don't know the difference between "to" and "too"? How does that work, exactly? How do I become "dumb" because of your mistakes? Am I the only one who sees a lack of logic here?