| Re: Colorado by Voth269 |
4-Aug-02/10:10 PM |
Eye-rays that disintegrate and fill with disease,
And they also allow for the beholder to see.
Out of the river the troglodytes jump out,
Bringing swift death to Gwen from No Doubt.
The mountains look so tame yet so wild,
Filled with the giants that fathered my child.
The contrast of colors from my prismatic blast,
Are not quite enough to stop the raging Tarrasque!
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| Re: Colorado by Voth269 |
4-Aug-02/10:12 PM |
Oh, I title that "Fiendfolio".
And "plants" doesn't rhyme with "past", Vothy.
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| Re: Tall can of Budweiser by bondjedi |
4-Aug-02/10:15 PM |
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Ahh, the haiku. Beautiful.
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| Re: Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi |
4-Aug-02/10:17 PM |
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| Re: a way by flatliner |
4-Aug-02/10:17 PM |
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I'm not sure if this is clever or... unclever. But you lose points for your lack of capital letters and proper punctuation. 'Cause I'm a dick with that stuff.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Aug-02/10:19 PM |
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I was expecting something funny about beer and/or the couch.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Aug-02/10:24 PM |
"You're" both abusing English. Poor, poor language.
I never liked 90210, honest.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Aug-02/10:26 PM |
Spring is when it smells like all the frozen dog doo is melting.
That's all.
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| Re: School girls lovely school girls by ==Doylum |
4-Aug-02/10:33 PM |
That touched me somewhere dear.
I think it was my wee-wee.
Didn't think the 2nd verse was quite as good as the others though. Better euphamisms could be had regarding gym knickers and "P.E.".
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| Re: Why Should I Care by DolphnLvr82 |
4-Aug-02/10:47 PM |
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Is the "big leap" in this poem telling someone that you love them? Or is it... you know... doing it? And is it about a dolphin?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Aug-02/11:22 PM |
What's "haning"?
When I looked it up on Dictionary.com, the top two suggestions were "hanging" and "caning", neither of which strike me as things you'd want to do to someone you love... Unless this poem is a whole lot more kinky than I had originally thought. "Oh baby, give me your wrecking ball! Right in the old lifeless house, that's it! Oooh oooh!!!"
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Aug-02/11:23 PM |
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Uhm... yeah. Like, take a chill pill, or something. :D
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| Re: Hot Maid by Agemo-Z |
4-Aug-02/11:25 PM |
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Well, this IS a Maid fantasy, so she has to be prudish and delicate. And I had to make kinky use of cleaning utensils somehow. Dusters are totally hot.
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