on Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi
4 Aug 2002, 10:17 PM
Beautiful!
on Why Should I Care by DolphnLvr82
4 Aug 2002, 10:47 PM
Is the "big leap" in this poem telling someone that you love them? Or is it... you know... doing it? And is it about a dolphin?
Eye-rays that disintegrate and fill with disease,
And they also allow for the beholder to see.
Out of the river the troglodytes jump out,
Bringing swift death to Gwen from No Doubt.
The mountains look so tame yet so wild,
Filled with the giants that fathered my child.
The contrast of colors from my prismatic blast,
Are not quite enough to stop the raging Tarrasque!
And they also allow for the beholder to see.
Out of the river the troglodytes jump out,
Bringing swift death to Gwen from No Doubt.
The mountains look so tame yet so wild,
Filled with the giants that fathered my child.
The contrast of colors from my prismatic blast,
Are not quite enough to stop the raging Tarrasque!
on Tall can of Budweiser by bondjedi
4 Aug 2002, 10:15 PM
Ahh, the haiku. Beautiful.
on some deleted poem
4 Aug 2002, 10:19 PM
I was expecting something funny about beer and/or the couch.
on some deleted poem
4 Aug 2002, 10:24 PM
"You're" both abusing English. Poor, poor language.
I never liked 90210, honest.
I never liked 90210, honest.
on some deleted poem
4 Aug 2002, 10:26 PM
Spring is when it smells like all the frozen dog doo is melting.
That's all.
That's all.
on School girls lovely school girls by ==Doylum
4 Aug 2002, 10:33 PM
That touched me somewhere dear.
I think it was my wee-wee.
Didn't think the 2nd verse was quite as good as the others though. Better euphamisms could be had regarding gym knickers and "P.E.".
I think it was my wee-wee.
Didn't think the 2nd verse was quite as good as the others though. Better euphamisms could be had regarding gym knickers and "P.E.".
on some deleted poem
4 Aug 2002, 11:22 PM
What's "haning"?
When I looked it up on Dictionary.com, the top two suggestions were "hanging" and "caning", neither of which strike me as things you'd want to do to someone you love... Unless this poem is a whole lot more kinky than I had originally thought. "Oh baby, give me your wrecking ball! Right in the old lifeless house, that's it! Oooh oooh!!!"
When I looked it up on Dictionary.com, the top two suggestions were "hanging" and "caning", neither of which strike me as things you'd want to do to someone you love... Unless this poem is a whole lot more kinky than I had originally thought. "Oh baby, give me your wrecking ball! Right in the old lifeless house, that's it! Oooh oooh!!!"
on some deleted poem
4 Aug 2002, 11:23 PM
Uhm... yeah. Like, take a chill pill, or something. :D
And "plants" doesn't rhyme with "past", Vothy.