Re: The Enslaver of Men by Tascobar	19-Dec-02/1:53 PM
always a hoot.X
Re: Hunt by cobalt	19-Dec-02/1:53 PM
DUCK KILLER!
Re: requiem for an ex-girlfriend by natalie	19-Dec-02/1:52 PM
brilliant.
Re: UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/1:18 PM
congradulations! sorry for horus's comment it came out wrong he mumbles out loud..see it's like this sometimes you read something and instantaneously you subconciously mutter things symbols something flashes in your head then its out, and because recently he was involved intimately in some of those symbol flashes he might of thought you wrote the piece towards his situation in a good way, and he was just responding as if he had been asked a question, and then it came out like that.......i know everything will be well with you and yours i give you my blessing and love in a sentence. You are a wonderfull person, healthy and good. You will be a loving and teaching parent, and you are already..you have our best wishes and true love and faith and respect pulling for you and yours this holiday season..yours truly, Bachus, horus and Baba. So mote it be. because it is. have a ten for your picture and your sound.y
Re: a comment on "turd to yo mutha" daywalker shittalker by Bachus	18-Dec-02/7:14 PM
watch the one with wesley were he's paralyzed. it has some cool wheelchair fight sequences i think it's waterdance or water something or other.n
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	17-Dec-02/11:24 PM
this is still beyond anything vaguely gaseous. shine on you crazy diamond
Re: Mind of War by t_t_redhot	17-Dec-02/8:11 PM
this is nothing like stans rice work, so don't listen to that guy who can right a poem in 126 seconds while listening to culturally significant jazz and oops goddamnit plugging up the toilet for the bluecollar people on the first snow of winter in 126 seconds. hooray for the muted trumpet and a drunk snacking too much at three in the morning. this poem is a bit passe and bland, but it hangs well and gets the point across simple enough.d
Re: a comment on wax by New Life Drug	17-Dec-02/7:43 PM
i like the last line now i don't know why i didn't recognize the scope of it earlier, sorry.o
Re: a comment on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8	17-Dec-02/1:45 AM
what about when you played in the fountain with the boys at summercamp? or all of those times you checked for freshness with your fingers in the shower, also my son's godmother is 41..so your point? maybe she should be 61, or perhaps 11? my hands hate cement, but i do know how to pour a doric column in the winter with no mixer, no truck..and two mexicans named paco, and flaco..also i didn't know high school diplomas came with poetry licenses?, and some of us have to dumb it down to deal with stalkers more appropriately, so that they get the point. don't you ever play with your wife and kids? good.so, why don't you leave mine alone? because, without them you have absolutely nothing to stand on. zip. zippy. nada.go spend some quality time with your family ward cleaver. you are horribly out gunned and strategically speaking, ill equipped.
Re: a comment on The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8	17-Dec-02/1:26 AM
Athena is a girl i know that use to stay in my guest house. as for her poetry, that's her problem..well i can tell you this thief or not she moves in more challenging spheres than you, but i fear you have her plowed in the poetry area, but that's not saying alot. is it. Christof bet poet here? i would argue that there are better, see that's the problem with being #1..all sunday drives come to an end..enjoy your time here..glad you enjoyed the opera..here's a moist towelette you missed a little chunk on your cheek there..all clean.scoot along now.LMAO.r
Re: a comment on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8	17-Dec-02/1:16 AM
Well yes, but no..brother, i know i have given up part of our most secret of ceremonies 'the naked gay whipping of wretched fraudulent poets with dental floss fermented kidney stones', but he just wouldn't stop whining, and he has to pee every five minutes..shame really..ah the soap part was just my negativity perculating i wont know till the first of the year..wow, do i need a cigarette i've had my cock in this psuedo intellectual all day, and boy what a barker, and if you turn him into the light just so he coos...no shit..here try him out. got a smoke? thanks...like the opera? funny aye? here i'll sign your program..you can borrow my binaculars.t
Re: a comment on HGH 1000 (human growth hormone) fountain of youth? by Bachus	17-Dec-02/12:47 AM
much creepier than ours..do you think perhaps you could stop rhyming for a second you're scaring me.u
Re: setting the record straight on April by poetandknowit	17-Dec-02/12:41 AM
AESTHETIC THEORY "Contrive a poem out of ears. Tell it so that its petals unchocolate like a brain in a jar Wax walnut, melting with thought. Make it a poem almost lewdly knowledgable and make its knowledge ooze, syrup from the punched trunk. Make it snake up to the molecule whorey and put its mouth atomic against the mouth of its core. Pull on its stem to expose its foetus. Make it have children with sleek ginger jaws, make the dogs moan when it passes, let it out of its jar make it lie with our corpse, our chaos. Make it hungry, evil, enemy of Death. Put it on paper. Read it. Make surgery its sigh, and of such sting the scorpions call it Jehovah & Who. Make it now before you crapout. Contrive it, sperm it, stroke it, make it efficient, make it fit, make it more poem than Poem can survive." Stan Rice, Some Lamb 1975..
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	17-Dec-02/12:24 AM
LAMENT "Cry not, my baby. Cry. I know a frog ate a white moth. The frog did not cry. That's why he's a frog. The moth did not cry. My baby, cry not. Cry. There is much to do. I will cry too. I will cry for you. Stan Rice, Some Lamb 1975..
Re: a comment on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8	17-Dec-02/12:12 AM
33 years 4 months.
Re: (Rough Draft) The Adventures of Zoot and Corky by Owner of the Sky	16-Dec-02/12:41 PM
people are strange, submissive dominant sex is the rave of the future, because it was the rave of the past. tension builds and creates. where's the backstory here? gone. leaving the reader with an empty space to fill using their own imaginations. that can be good and bad que no. a good spanking and dinner on the floor does loads for a struggling relationship..well, much more than an overpaid JEW shrink none the less. nice poem.
Re: Am I Still Here? by Ranger	16-Dec-02/12:31 PM
very, very, clever.inventive, amusing. it left me smiling, but still in truth..i hate you. very much..every fiber of your midget with a bum leg demeanor..may your finger nails explode, and your tonsils grow back unevenly.
Re: The City (Sodom) by blkarak	15-Dec-02/5:29 PM
crazy..chicago meets the ten commandments..now this is a fucking great little ditty..complicated rhyme scheme, powerful nouns, self adjusting adjectives and an beginning, and arc, and an end, here's a ten there's a similarity here that matches up to alot of your other works here...it's hard to shake a style.in'n't.
Re: A holiday warning by INTRANSIT	15-Dec-02/5:20 PM
alright. damnit, this needs immediate surgery for if you can't, i'm sure you shan't be fearing the biege and teals.
Re: a comment on HGH 1000 (human growth hormone) fountain of youth? by Bachus	15-Dec-02/4:51 PM
i don't know? probably a gnc store, or perhaps a local herbe-shope. botanica 4 monica. b-daltons, and Wendys in the bannana shaikee.