Re: TRIBUTE TO A FRIEND by Nicholas Monson	5-Dec-02/9:49 PM
better. i like imps...they can be excessive indeed.??
Re: HATTIE by Nicholas Monson	5-Dec-02/9:51 PM
what a tart. ha! that's funny.8. sink? could you?d
Re: ending by Limness	5-Dec-02/10:27 PM
no shit.t
Re: Reptiles & Dust - Part Three (Forty-three through Sixty-three) by Wulf	5-Dec-02/10:31 PM
48, and 54 were great..the whole thing was just totally fucking like hanging out over a crack in a volcano, sucking gas and seeing visions...this was loads of fun..long as fuck, but entertaining and revealing. a must read on poemranker. 10! congradulations.
Re: rules by roses are read	5-Dec-02/10:35 PM
you know what's fun about mouth fucking? the teeth, pudgie.@
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Dec-02/10:40 PM
this is my favorite poem ever sis. i love you. i gonna be a dad again maybe..you'll have a god daughter, maybe...where did you get the snake milking idea? cuz i never have heard you tell this story. 10. horus will be giving you big gold qu-ees on this...i ayditioned today for italian ice cream Magnum? at first i thought it was for condoms or malt liquor..haha..isn't that hilarious..i honestly didn't know it was ice cream..funny aye? my brain went from dirty harry to malt liqour but lo and behold....ice cream. who knew?d
Re: idiots by w~* ATHENA *~w	6-Dec-02/11:36 AM
i would of ended at sesame street.@
Re: Killing me. by Plasticgirlwithgun	6-Dec-02/11:49 AM
what? fatter? you date rich guys and you're a spoiled brat...you watch ricky schroeder in silver spoon reruns...ha!ha! and the truth is blood makes you queasy...great poem! 9.h
Re: sleep at 2:24 by blackball	6-Dec-02/11:53 AM
even at 2:24 typos like that fuck up the poem like a monkey wrench. change i to they in increases self involvement by pretending to shy away from it.f
Re: fragment by nentwined	6-Dec-02/12:25 PM
i hate that...when that happens.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Dec-02/10:47 PM
tell my friend pan..come back home when he can. 9.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Dec-02/10:52 AM
it's the description of a location close and personal, any fool can see that..i like richa alot, and have also used the 'extreme' metaphor to describe and set a mood, so get the fuck off his back. once again great title, dark mood, light night. a beautifully jagged beach. 9. p.s if you go read any of his work you will find his style constant, peculiar, and void of to much estrogen, or testerone...and at least he doesn't edit every one of his poems 5,000 fucking times a day. by the way richa, i know you don't talk, but quit editing this poem damnit. it's fine. perfection is for god freaks, stay down here with us at the dark beach we shall count the tides, and be undressed to cleanse by the crabs of the deep.l
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Dec-02/11:11 AM
nice title...great filler....take the "me" out, put something like cockaroach, or raid can, or i'm in the roach motel, or ROACH CLIP YEAH! ROACH CLIP...SHOEY SHOE SHOEY SHOEY SHOEY SHOE, CHICKITY CHAW, CHICKY WICKY WICKY CHAW! i like roach clip, you know what that is right..it's a joint holder, on the low down, on thw wect coast they call the end of a joint a roach, on the east coast they call it a cocktail.
Re: And uncle sam says... by INTRANSIT	7-Dec-02/11:32 AM
see, that's why votings out and snipings in. they are all retarted polecats with private agendas.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Dec-02/11:50 AM
it's a poem okay, not a secret pact with aliens...do you think you could just leave it alone for fucks sake you talk so much about what the fucking puzzle means no one's going to want to look at it. it becomes as mysterious as a go-fish game..that's what i respect about certain writers on this sight shakowski and richa and quite a few others..they don't de-mystify their work by standing on top of it all day talking. they walk away to do more work. no one want's to know every fucking detail of what this means, or that...it keeps it from belonging to a reader when an author does that, and that's not what poetry's about...i mean..fuck! you dont write the god damn subtext into a screenplay do you? no! you let the actors figure it out and make it their own, so that they can give it to the audience to make it in turn theirs. so here's your ten AGAIN, BUt touch this fucking poem one more time sis, and no more votes damnit. no one want's to read someone who is constantly second guessing themselves..you're a great writer sis..perfection is for hacks and professors, their is a secret beauty in something slightly flawed a distinct fingerprint a uniqueness, fuck utopian cities, give me a hermit in a beaver damn any day.t
Re: edgar a's raven by Garrett S Sexton	7-Dec-02/3:34 PM
you left out the end: bastard, bastard, till it squirts. there is only one thing wrong with the tale. it's a preposterous lie. you're a spoiled brat with both parents...a bastard's hanger on-er and that my friend makes you camp, to say the least.
Re: She Puts The Fun In Funeral by David	7-Dec-02/5:07 PM
"she wore dresses she could throw away in the morning" larry rivers.
Re: sex by Limness	7-Dec-02/5:08 PM
yes, we do.
Re: flight by soccer23	7-Dec-02/5:09 PM
soccer 23, soccer 23..i get the feeling you like soccer and your numbers 23.
Re: International Economic and Social Cooperation by David	7-Dec-02/5:20 PM
what?! no muslims!? that's it..i'm writing a fatwah..and calling for a jihad.