Poemranker [Poem: sleep at 2:24] [by blackball] Sun Apr 28 09:50:49 PDT 2024

sleep at 2:24 (Haiku) by blackball

you felt me captured again the sun exploded they lost another

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Down the ladder: made

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6524

Posted: December 5, 2002 10:28 PM PST; Last modified: December 14, 2002 1:29 AM PST
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Comments:

[n/a] god'swife @ 209.178.180.130 | 5-Dec-02/10:36 PM | Reply

Typo darling.

[n/a] deleted user @ 212.219.142.161 | 6-Dec-02/12:57 AM | Reply

eh?

[n/a] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 6-Dec-02/7:07 AM | Reply

exlpoded->exploded

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and I'm afraid I don't get it.

[6] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Dec-02/11:53 AM | Reply

even at 2:24 typos like that fuck up the poem like a monkey wrench. change i to they in increases self involvement by pretending to shy away from it.f

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