poemranker ::sleep at 2:24 by blackball

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Haiku № 28756

sleep at 2:24

by blackball

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Dec 2002 · Edited 14 Dec 2002 · 4 comments

you felt me captured again the sun exploded they lost another

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4 comments

[n/a] god'swife 5-Dec-02/10:36 PM Reply
Typo darling.
[n/a] deleted user 6-Dec-02/12:57 AM Reply
eh?
[n/a] nentwined 6-Dec-02/7:07 AM Reply
exlpoded->exploded

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and I'm afraid I don't get it.
[6] Bachus 6-Dec-02/11:53 AM Reply
even at 2:24 typos like that fuck up the poem like a monkey wrench. change i to they in increases self involvement by pretending to shy away from it.f