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edgar a's raven (Free verse) by Garrett S Sexton
I was born a bastard a bastard I was born a plastered bastard bastard a bastard for evermore And even though a drunken bastard a drunken bastard sworn under oath to be a bastard a bastard evermore And if you think this bastard poem has an end the bastard bloody well doesn't the bastard never ends. bastard, bastard, bastard, bastard, bastard, bastard bastard till it hurts bastard, bastard, bastard

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7719
Posted: December 7, 2002 12:38 PM PST; Last modified: December 7, 2002 12:38 PM PST
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[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 7-Dec-02/3:34 PM | Reply
you left out the end: bastard, bastard, till it squirts.
there is only one thing wrong with the tale. it's a preposterous lie. you're a spoiled brat with both parents...a bastard's hanger on-er and that my friend makes you camp, to say the least.
[n/a] Garrett S Sexton @ 213.122.23.55 > Bachus | 8-Dec-02/2:36 AM | Reply
Bachus you are a fool, a bastard is that born out of wedlock.go look silly somewhere else!
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > Garrett S Sexton | 8-Dec-02/12:17 PM | Reply
i happen to be president of the bastards club, and demand to see your red peter badge of bastardry.
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