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macgyver's lament (Free verse) by snacktime
excuse me
but i seem to have become
stuck in a time warp again
minutes are colder
than in the Nineties
and the walls are coloured insubstantial
shimmer-blue indestructible
did i dare to fail?
too much for Man to be
all
much too
easier to simply act out a scene from a movie
than to really touch my skin and feel each bead of sweat
individually
as it
rolls
from my forehead
or to really ponder our collective histories
but i digress
regress
please find me a socket wrench and a pack of cards so i can fix it
thanks for your concern
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7723
Posted: December 10, 2002 11:12 PM PST; Last modified: December 10, 2002 11:12 PM PST
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