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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award: idiots (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~wfor appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising. Read with caution! there's a lady that knows
all that flys is old.
its a dance of the macabre
a dance of the timbre
a dance of the unemployed.
psyche 1 psyche 2 what do
you know?
sesame street.
we scream
we dream
yes, we do.
Up the ladder:
The futillity of charity.
Down the ladder:
International Economic and Social Cooperation
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Posted: December 5, 2002 10:17 PM PST; Last modified: December 5, 2002 10:17 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7645 Comments:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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6-Dec-02/5:51 AM
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This is quite a hopeful ending to the isolation of unemployment, it appeased me, dark mixed with light nicely here -8-
Do you ever write anything yourself or have you simply developed a keen ability to cut and paste.
I do write myself, all my stuff is on 'word' or on poetry.com, and because i dont have a computer at home i do it at work risking the sack, if you wish to challenge my authenticity PK fine I'm more than up to it. Also a lot of my writing is personal and unless I have a doppelganger on the loose then yes I write my own work.
Bit spiky today are we ?
he wasn't talking to you, unless you are athena.
who wrote this one, p&k? hatter? i looked but can't find-- looks like lines from a few sources sewn together to me.
Led Zeppelin should get *some* credit for (at least inspiring) the first two lines; other than that, it's anyone's guess.
i would of ended at sesame street.@
sorry Pk / ZZinnia my mistake
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