Re: a comment on Southern Mississippii Standstill by wilco	17-Jul-04/4:01 PM
And listen to ZZ Top. And Johnny Rebel.
Re: a comment on I'll Make It Through by cuddlytiger17	16-Jul-04/7:43 PM
Interesting. It has a similar theme to my new poem, "An Old Man's Folly."
Re: Ago by Enkidu	16-Jul-04/5:19 PM
The first verse reminds me of the book of Revelation.
Re: The Sky is My Nation by shit	16-Jul-04/5:04 PM
A plump -0- for you.
Re: Priority by MacFrantic	16-Jul-04/5:04 PM
With a £1000 tart.
Re: I Love You by QuirkyWonder	16-Jul-04/5:01 PM
Genius.
Re: Southern Mississippii Standstill by wilco	16-Jul-04/5:00 PM
When I think of southern USA, I imagine swamps and those boats that look a bit like hovercrafts, and men with dungarees and pitchforks and pigs under their arms. And also of Lynyrd Skynyrd. Maybe you should work these things into your poem.
Re: swallow it by anonandonandon	14-Jul-04/4:26 PM
I find this crude and offensive.
Re: a comment on The Heaven lies by Prince of Void	14-Jul-04/4:06 PM
That doesn't even mean anything.
Re: a comment on The Spaz by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	14-Jul-04/9:41 AM
Sure, it doesn't obey the *conventional* rules of a sonnet, but why shouldn't I experiment with new forms of sonnet? I don't even acknowledge the conventional meaning of the word "conventional." That is how non-conformist I am.
Re: a comment on The Spaz by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	13-Jul-04/2:51 PM
Thanks.
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	12-Jul-04/4:05 PM
My favorite bit is : A shoe-string, dear? Bright red. Short It cannot be for an adult’s shoe. Genius
Re: All Alone by pinay_miss_azn	12-Jul-04/4:00 PM
Hey, this is really great!!1 It reminds me of my new poem. Can I make a suggestion? I reckon "perchance" would be better as "peradventure."
Re: Desperation by gavinduff	12-Jul-04/9:23 AM
hi. i realy like your poem!!!1
Re: a comment on Brando's Dead (slight reprise) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	12-Jul-04/3:37 AM
I would have thought it didn't matter, but that is the obvious answer and so probably not it. Maybe it is switch, because whatever door you choose there is always an empty one that can be shown to you, so the probability you have chosen the right door is still 1/3 after door B is revealed, so the probability the prize is in the remaining door is 2/3. I mean, you either have chosen the right door initially (proability 1/3) or you haven't (probability 2/3). opening door B doesn't change anything, because whatever door you open, there is always an empty door that the host can reveal. It doesn't really tell you anything. But it would seem a bit odd that you could have two doors, one of which contains a prize, and you have no information as to which it is, and the probability (as far as you are concerned) is not 50:50.
Re: a comment on Searching by dougsoderstrom	11-Jul-04/1:34 PM
I find your comments intolerably smug.
Re: a comment on The Ladies and the Bum by Dovina	11-Jul-04/1:30 PM
And you can't just assume that any marks below 5 are insincere stabbing and getting even. They might also be because your poem is rubbish.
Re: a comment on The Ladies and the Bum by Dovina	11-Jul-04/3:25 AM
I was utterly sincere.
Re: a comment on The circle of life by sanity	10-Jul-04/6:19 AM
Yeah.
Re: The Ladies and the Bum by Dovina	10-Jul-04/6:18 AM
You deleted all my comments. Unprofessional.