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swallow it (Free verse) by anonandonandon Fires danced within his eyes
As he touched her pretty thighs
She thought to scream
But his mouth became a screen
Till her terror had no choice
But to swallow his voice
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Posted: July 14, 2004 10:30 AM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2004 10:30 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.865529 Overall Rank: 10367 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.130.62.63
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14-Jul-04/12:30 PM
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Indeed.
I find this crude and offensive.
a darn sight better than voicing her swallows
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