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swallow it (Free verse) by anonandonandon
Fires danced within his eyes As he touched her pretty thighs She thought to scream But his mouth became a screen Till her terror had no choice But to swallow his voice

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.865529
Overall Rank: 10356
Posted: July 14, 2004 10:30 AM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2004 10:30 AM PDT
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[10] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 14-Jul-04/12:30 PM | Reply
Indeed.
[0] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 80.42.123.196 | 14-Jul-04/4:26 PM | Reply
I find this crude and offensive.
[8] patty t @ 24.156.158.81 | 14-Jul-04/9:45 PM | Reply
a darn sight better than voicing her swallows
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