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swallow it

Member since 2004 · Posted 14 Jul 2004 · 3 comments

Fires danced within his eyes As he touched her pretty thighs She thought to scream But his mouth became a screen Till her terror had no choice But to swallow his voice

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3 comments

[10] horus8 14-Jul-04/12:30 PM Reply
Indeed.
[0] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 14-Jul-04/4:26 PM Reply
I find this crude and offensive.
[8] patty t 14-Jul-04/9:45 PM Reply
a darn sight better than voicing her swallows