Wash Your Hands...

Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Mar 2004 · 2 comments

Wash Your Hands Before Mommy Comes Home... You Ate The Cake And Now Your Being Punished Just Wait Until She Gets Home... We Told You Not To Eat The Cake Forget About This Home... We're Throwing You Out You Now Live With Your Sins... --- I Washed My Hands Once I was Caught... I Was Drawn By Its Magnitude And It's Force... It Called Me By My Name And Commented On My Shirt... I Fell For It's Trap And Found My Dad... - Physically Normal, But Mentally Painful..

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[7] richa 17-Mar-04/11:16 AM Reply

No particularly good lines, but the experimentation with style is interesting, and almost comes off.

[2] Katzclear 22-Mar-04/6:25 PM Reply

I went from depressed to lost and depressed. what the hell