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Wash Your Hands... (Free verse) by Blindpoetry
Wash Your Hands Before Mommy Comes Home... You Ate The Cake And Now Your Being Punished Just Wait Until She Gets Home... We Told You Not To Eat The Cake Forget About This Home... We're Throwing You Out You Now Live With Your Sins... --- I Washed My Hands Once I was Caught... I Was Drawn By Its Magnitude And It's Force... It Called Me By My Name And Commented On My Shirt... I Fell For It's Trap And Found My Dad... - Physically Normal, But Mentally Painful..

Up the ladder: breaking hearts
Down the ladder: swallow it

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.865529
Overall Rank: 10349
Posted: March 16, 2004 3:03 PM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2004 3:03 PM PST
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Comments:
[7] richa @ 81.178.234.98 | 17-Mar-04/11:16 AM | Reply
No particularly good lines, but the experimentation with style is interesting, and almost comes off.
[2] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 | 22-Mar-04/6:25 PM | Reply
I went from depressed to lost and depressed. what the hell
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