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Wash Your Hands... (Free verse) by Blindpoetry

Wash Your Hands Before Mommy Comes Home... You Ate The Cake And Now Your Being Punished Just Wait Until She Gets Home... We Told You Not To Eat The Cake Forget About This Home... We're Throwing You Out You Now Live With Your Sins... --- I Washed My Hands Once I was Caught... I Was Drawn By Its Magnitude And It's Force... It Called Me By My Name And Commented On My Shirt... I Fell For It's Trap And Found My Dad... - Physically Normal, But Mentally Painful..

richa 17-Mar-04/11:16 AM
No particularly good lines, but the experimentation with style is interesting, and almost comes off.




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