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I Love You (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder
You take my hand And give me yours Just like we did with our hearts When we spoke those 3 special words "I love you" You said "I love you too" I said We held each other tight Too afraid to let go Together we grew And overcame all our fears So I stand before you today To tell you this... "I love you not only for who you are But what you have made me" The silence is broken When you lean in for a kiss And whisper in my ear "I love you for that too"

Up the ladder: Remember me she said
Down the ladder: The Sky Is My Nation

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4379
Posted: July 16, 2004 4:29 PM PDT; Last modified: July 16, 2004 4:29 PM PDT
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[10] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 80.42.83.114 | 16-Jul-04/5:01 PM | Reply
Genius.
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