Re: a comment on Brando's Dead (slight reprise) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	10-Jul-04/6:05 AM
You smell.
Re: The circle of life by sanity	10-Jul-04/5:58 AM
What about when the sun explodes?
Re: Friends Forever? by nicole081083	10-Jul-04/5:53 AM
I think this would work better if you reworked it into a limerick.
Re: Ze invsible limerick by DR Limerick	10-Jul-04/5:39 AM
An excellent example of the zero syllable limerick.
Re: a comment on The Ladies and the Bum by Dovina	9-Jul-04/5:10 PM
You are trying to sensationalize being a tramp, which is unacceptable. What if an impressionable youth were to visit this site, read your poem, then decide to quit school and become a tramp, believing it to be "hip" or "cool"? They'd be injecting drugs into their scrotum within a week.
Re: Somber Like My Pain by TwilightDawned	9-Jul-04/4:11 PM
I can only assume, given that you have spelled Splinter with a capital S, that you are referring to Splinter off of the Turtles. But what sight could be so horrible that it would make your head literally turn into Splinter off of the Turtles? This poem really doesn't stand up to scrutiny.
Re: Mm, Shoes... ? by fevriere	9-Jul-04/4:07 PM
The title promises shoes, but the poem only disappoints. To me, there is nothing more erotic than a cardboard box full of sweaty trainers.
Re: a comment on Unsung california dreamin. by SupremeDreamer	8-Jul-04/10:41 AM
You are clearly not from California at all. I suspect you are actaully from Watford.
Re: A Piñon Limb by Dovina	8-Jul-04/2:59 AM
I think you should change "By winter’s glistening jewels" to "By winter's glistening jowls." It would make the poem flow more beautifully.
Re: a comment on Unsung california dreamin. by SupremeDreamer	7-Jul-04/9:55 AM
http://www.tvtome.com/tvtome/servlet/ShowMainServlet/showid-2805/California_Dreams/
Re: a comment on Why you don't fall through the floor by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	7-Jul-04/7:42 AM
Very well. But riddle me this: Who is better, Run DMC or the Beastie Boys?
Re: a comment on Absolute Truth (about Quarton) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	7-Jul-04/7:39 AM
Explain further.
Re: a comment on Why you don't fall through the floor by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	7-Jul-04/7:15 AM
In my lectures and stuff, d³a has always been used to mean a volume element. It might just be a bit of incongruous notation like sin^-1 meaning arcsin. I don't know, no one has ever told me. Maybe I should just have written dV = 3a²da.
Re: a comment on Absolute Truth (about Quarton) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	7-Jul-04/7:00 AM
It is technically a limerick, it's just that "she departed one way, in a relative way" should be two seperate lines.
Re: Unsung california dreamin. by SupremeDreamer	7-Jul-04/4:02 AM
Are you from California? Would you say teen sitcom "California Dreams" was an acurate representation of your life?
Re: a comment on Recycled Stardust by Quarton	7-Jul-04/3:55 AM
Yes, and you can also justify a belief in any kind of pseudo-mystical nonsense. For example, to justify a belief in feng shui, the argument goes something like this: 1)Science doesn't have all the answers you know. 2)Science doesn't explain feng shui. 3)Therefore feng shui must be real. 4)QED
Re: a comment on Recycled Stardust by Quarton	7-Jul-04/3:51 AM
Where have you got this nutty idea about "the basic oneness" being one of the most important revelations of modern physics? It isn't even any kind of revelation about modern physics. Nor is it the "central theme" of quantum mechanics. I don't belive you (because you are wrong), but I do believe in quantum mechanics. And I can't beleive you just said "If you don't know this basic truth, then you should avoid the subject rather than expose your ignorance which so far, has been considerable." Come on, you must be taking us for a ride? Do you *really* believe all this holistic mumbo jumbo? If you want to know about quantum mechanics, please see my excellent piece entitled "Why you don't fall through the floor." (Although please ignmore all the nasty business about manhole covers. I was young and foolish.) Thanks for listening, I've been ?-Dave_Mysterious-?.
Re: a comment on Translation by Dovina	6-Jul-04/5:51 PM
They are the same, except if you say the second one you are gay.
Re: Cool car!! by DR Limerick	6-Jul-04/4:38 PM
Having a doctorate in limerick construction, I expect you are free to experiment with all kinds of new forms of limerick, for example ones which have completely the wrong number of sylables and don't scan at all. I particularly enjoy your own brand of ambient lounge limerick.
Re: a comment on Translation by Dovina	6-Jul-04/4:23 PM
Can't I? Oh, alright then.