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Friends Forever? (Free verse) by nicole081083
Friends forever that's what I always thought Friends forever even though many times we fought I never thought our friendship would end like this You are someone that I am truly going to miss I know that I was totally in the wrong And now my forever friend is gone

Up the ladder: Prepropositioned pudding
Down the ladder: Wicked Corruption

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.571429
Weighted score: 5.153681
Overall Rank: 5199
Posted: July 9, 2004 9:27 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2004 9:27 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.16 | 9-Jul-04/9:52 PM | Reply
i like it, good poem
[5] New Life Drug @ 69.106.240.249 | 10-Jul-04/12:02 AM | Reply
the wrong is a bad place to be
[5] titan69 @ 62.31.23.84 | 10-Jul-04/1:00 AM | Reply
nice pome!
[4] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 80.42.75.189 | 10-Jul-04/5:53 AM | Reply
I think this would work better if you reworked it into a limerick.
[7] Rodavlas @ 141.151.88.143 | 10-Jul-04/6:44 PM | Reply
quick poem.
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