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Friends Forever? (Free verse) by nicole081083

Friends forever that's what I always thought Friends forever even though many times we fought I never thought our friendship would end like this You are someone that I am truly going to miss I know that I was totally in the wrong And now my forever friend is gone

?-Dave_Mysterious-? 10-Jul-04/5:53 AM
I think this would work better if you reworked it into a limerick.




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