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Cool car!!

by DR Limerick

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 Jul 2004 · 5 comments

There once was a man from Bogatar. Who drove around in the rain, in an open top car. "Yes you may look a fool," "But boy you feel cool" "No matter how wet you are.

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[9] Shuushin 6-Jul-04/11:28 AM Reply
Bogatar and "open top car" go very well, even if a little telegraphed.
[0] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 6-Jul-04/4:38 PM Reply
Having a doctorate in limerick construction, I expect you are free to experiment with all kinds of new forms of limerick, for example ones which have completely the wrong number of sylables and don't scan at all. I particularly enjoy your own brand of ambient lounge limerick.
[n/a] DR Limerick › ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 7-Jul-04/11:45 AM Reply
Zanken you dave i iz good to see someone gets it.
yar deas ar my own brand of limericks
i iz triing moor things later keep whatching diz space?
[10] blacksoul 22-Dec-04/7:28 AM Reply
I can dig it doc.-10-
[n/a] DR Limerick › blacksoul 22-Dec-04/2:07 PM Reply
Just like you. hay soul man!!