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Cool car!! (Limerick) by DR Limerick There once was a man from Bogatar.
Who drove around in the rain, in an open top car.
"Yes you may look a fool,"
"But boy you feel cool"
"No matter how wet you are.
Up the ladder:
Fireworks
Down the ladder:
Love Bruises
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Posted: July 6, 2004 11:14 AM PDT; Last modified: July 6, 2004 11:14 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9761596 Overall Rank: 8366 Comments:
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Shuushin @ 147.154.235.51
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6-Jul-04/11:28 AM
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Bogatar and "open top car" go very well, even if a little telegraphed.
Having a doctorate in limerick construction, I expect you are free to experiment with all kinds of new forms of limerick, for example ones which have completely the wrong number of sylables and don't scan at all. I particularly enjoy your own brand of ambient lounge limerick.
Zanken you dave i iz good to see someone gets it.
yar deas ar my own brand of limericks i iz triing moor things later keep whatching diz space?
I can dig it doc.-10-
Just like you. hay soul man!!
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