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Figid Rrigid

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Oct 2006 · Edited 11 Oct 2006 · 2 comments

Deadly driver, dangerous driving slow Always blocking, never upping motion Nowhere punctual, newer people wait Getting later, nearing panic station Every gap, constatly chances taken Rigid slow, unchanging speed. Wait

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[n/a] Hostileintent 11-Oct-06/4:30 PM Reply

tried a new format for this one....what do people think??

1underlying message (danger)split into its letters, each letter to start a sentence

2each sentence is 10 syllables

3each sentence composed of 2 parts
1st part of two words
2nd part of 3 words

4first and second words of each part relate

5last word in each line different, but rhyming????????

[6] Dovina 11-Oct-06/7:07 PM Reply

Form aside, (what does it matter?)it's a good observation, but what does "punctual" and "newer" have to do with it?