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Figid Rrigid (Free verse) by Hostileintent

Deadly driver, dangerous driving slow Always blocking, never upping motion Nowhere punctual, newer people wait Getting later, nearing panic station Every gap, constatly chances taken Rigid slow, unchanging speed. Wait

Dovina 11-Oct-06/7:07 PM
Form aside, (what does it matter?)it's a good observation, but what does "punctual" and "newer" have to do with it?




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