poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Figid Rrigid by Hostileintent.

Hostileintent11 Oct 2006

tried a new format for this one....what do people think??

1underlying message (danger)split into its letters, each letter to start a sentence

2each sentence is 10 syllables

3each sentence composed of 2 parts
1st part of two words
2nd part of 3 words

4first and second words of each part relate

5last word in each line different, but rhyming????????