| Re: The Light by the_unknown_angel83 |
25-Sep-03/4:38 PM |
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How can you live with yourself knowing that you wrote this poem?
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| Re: ME AGAIN by oldschool |
25-Sep-03/4:40 PM |
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What school did you go to? I was at Eton.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
25-Sep-03/4:47 PM |
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You need to abridge this by a further eight lines.
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25-Sep-03/5:06 PM |
Did you know that John Cleese's real name is John Cheese?
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(It would be 10, but half the lines don't scan properly)
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25-Sep-03/5:34 PM |
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When I was about 10, "space-ship" was a word for a floater. -10-
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Sep-03/4:15 PM |
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Poemranker, like Scrabble, does not allow the use of proper nouns.
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| Re: AND A NICE CUP OF CHAR by Garrett S Sexton |
26-Sep-03/4:23 PM |
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I smoke Lambert and Butler. Otherwise accurate. -9-
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Sep-03/4:34 PM |
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This poem made me really want to have a cigarette.
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| Re: Life's Work by baughworm |
26-Sep-03/4:37 PM |
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The second verse is quite excellent, but then it got a bit soppy.
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| Re: Conform by oldschool |
26-Sep-03/4:50 PM |
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I see you have really bucked the system by refusing to use an apostrophe to indicate a contraction. Power to the people!
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| Re: bumblebee robot by FreeFormFixation |
26-Sep-03/4:54 PM |
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Bees are really excellent.
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| Re: Ginger Prawns prior to Sea world with Jeremy Irons by Bachus |
26-Sep-03/4:57 PM |
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Mensturate in the shark pool!!! Why didn't I think of that?
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| Re: paper boats by sally6479 |
27-Sep-03/5:23 PM |
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I particularly like the first inversion around lines 5 to 6.
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| Re: If i go out I'll catch it and see the uglys. by baphomet |
28-Sep-03/5:02 PM |
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Perhaps it might interest you to know that I have rabies.
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| Re: A spectacular poem by a handsome man by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
28-Sep-03/5:12 PM |
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Wait, are you saying you actually went to a poetry reading place? What did you expect?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Sep-03/5:16 PM |
Suck
You suck
You really suck bigtime
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| Re: Pin worms and cake. by baphomet |
28-Sep-03/5:30 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Sep-03/5:37 PM |
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Do you write poetry for a living?
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| Re: religion by ThePariahDog |
28-Sep-03/5:41 PM |
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| Re: body image by http://mulberryfairy |
29-Sep-03/6:04 AM |
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You should have just drawn an ASCII picture of a naked woman's body.
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