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paper boats (Free verse) by sally6479
it's a memory we all have
harbours in the gutter
It may have been my grandfather
but the memory isn't clear
I remember his hands
carefully folding the newspaper
but I don't recall the folds
fold it one way
then the other
a hundred different combinations
but I can't get it right
I ask you
but you forget aswell
the memory is there
but it's vague
I should ask him
but I can't
the memory is vague
maybe it belongs to someone else
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10127
Posted: September 27, 2003 2:27 PM PDT; Last modified: September 27, 2003 2:27 PM PDT
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