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ME AGAIN (Free verse) by oldschool
Yeah that's right, it is me Stacey Broke my heart right on MtV Yeah i heard every damm thing that you said. But you left me breathing, should have left me dead. You lied to the devil, the devil got burnt But i will bite back, no way i'll stay hurt. I'll take a knive and- cut you like a movie- Drain all your blood and drink you in my smoothie. All this time you made me feel like a wussy I'll take a pistol- and blast off your pussy! Yeah my mind aint too hazy Taxi Driver, Scorcese! I'll drown you in poison and wont throw a rope We inmates Stacey, and you just dropped the soap!

Up the ladder: I can, could, would.
Down the ladder: tanka(4)

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7681
Posted: September 25, 2003 12:24 PM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2003 12:24 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 25-Sep-03/3:43 PM | Reply
Looking at a shrunken gland surpasses reading this.
[0] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.209 | 25-Sep-03/4:40 PM | Reply
What school did you go to? I was at Eton.
[8] cpill @ 85.178.227.75 | 12-Jul-06/2:50 PM | Reply
Thats some funny sh!t
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