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I can, could, would. (Free verse) by TheVoiceless
I can’t tell you… Why I do what I do now. But I can tell you… Little things I could do now. I could show you… The enormous difference made. Would you like to see… What the change would make.
Up the ladder: St. Andrews
Down the ladder: ME AGAIN
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7677
Posted: September 13, 2003 1:10 AM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2003 1:10 AM PDT
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[7] suprembeaner @ 24.126.113.154 | 13-Sep-03/1:14 AM | Reply
the mute one was beter
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3char1per
[n/a] TheVoiceless @ 206.72.7.6 > suprembeaner | 13-Sep-03/1:29 AM | Reply
Short and direct to the point giving total view poems aren't always the best. I'll agree with you there. Not taking anything from the shorter poem writers I've seen some very good ones. Its just not my style or my favor read.

Any suggestions how to make it better?
[7] suprembeaner @ 24.126.113.154 > TheVoiceless | 13-Sep-03/1:34 AM | Reply
sorry I just begain
my poem writing coquest
check my poems out on
grendal, baphomet, suprembeaner(a tribute to supremedremer)
hahaha...3char1per
[6] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.8 | 13-Sep-03/8:57 PM | Reply
nice title
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