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I can, could, would.

Member since 2003 · Posted 13 Sep 2003 · 4 comments

I canât tell youâ¦ Why I do what I do now. But I can tell youâ¦ Little things I could do now. I could show youâ¦ The enormous difference made. Would you like to seeâ¦ What the change would make.

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[7] suprembeaner 13-Sep-03/1:14 AM Reply

the mute one was beter
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3char1per

[n/a] TheVoiceless › suprembeaner 13-Sep-03/1:29 AM Reply

Short and direct to the point giving total view poems aren't always the best. I'll agree with you there. Not taking anything from the shorter poem writers I've seen some very good ones. Its just not my style or my favor read.

Any suggestions how to make it better?

[7] suprembeaner › TheVoiceless 13-Sep-03/1:34 AM Reply

sorry I just begain
my poem writing coquest
check my poems out on
grendal, baphomet, suprembeaner(a tribute to supremedremer)
hahaha...3char1per

[6] http://mulberryfairy 13-Sep-03/8:57 PM Reply

nice title