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I can, could, would. (Free verse) by TheVoiceless

I can’t tell you… Why I do what I do now. But I can tell you… Little things I could do now. I could show you… The enormous difference made. Would you like to see… What the change would make.

TheVoiceless 13-Sep-03/1:29 AM
Short and direct to the point giving total view poems aren't always the best. I'll agree with you there. Not taking anything from the shorter poem writers I've seen some very good ones. Its just not my style or my favor read.

Any suggestions how to make it better?




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