Re: Carry You Inside by sliver |
1-Sep-03/9:40 PM |
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1-Sep-03/9:47 PM |
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Re: Between Now And Then by sliver |
1-Sep-03/10:05 PM |
This poem makes me happy and tearful all at the same time.
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1-Sep-03/10:13 PM |
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3-Sep-03/10:11 AM |
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Re: Those Crazy's people in my brainsky by Shardik |
3-Sep-03/10:37 AM |
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Re: cold sonnet by <~> |
4-Sep-03/2:59 PM |
really really like it, just a little wordy in some parts for me
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Re: Driftwood by GekoHawaii |
4-Sep-03/4:09 PM |
oh man, I really like this one, I'll have to read more of yours
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Re: Boy's Hell by shadowaura |
5-Sep-03/11:32 AM |
pretty good
PS ignore SupremeDreamer it's better that way
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7-Sep-03/9:39 AM |
Good content, not to mention a good reminder for me!
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7-Sep-03/9:41 AM |
Hey nice poem! Keep posting more!!!
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Re: 'Till Then by sliver |
7-Sep-03/9:45 AM |
How do you write like that! I really like how you almost trick the reader to think you are talking about something else and then leave them with a tear in their eye. . .well at least me
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Re: Why by J.B. Manning |
7-Sep-03/9:53 AM |
I like how it flows. . .but suggest that maybe the last line should be directed elsewhere.
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Re: 30,000 feet by Patsy |
7-Sep-03/9:55 AM |
I don't really understand it but part of it I find myself liking. . .what is it all about?
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Re: Recycle by Patsy |
7-Sep-03/9:58 AM |
(same comment as for your "30,000 Feet" poem)
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Re: If I Wrote The Perfect Poem by toward |
12-Sep-03/2:01 PM |
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15-Sep-03/2:48 PM |
good poem, always seem to like yours
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