Merci.

I don't think he's really in need of an uplifting statement like "If you get really good people will slag this type of thing off as trite." to reinforce his confidence.

What do you think?

Born, raised, and currently residing in San Jose, California. But you can believe whatever you wish. Lets say that I'm a hermit huddled in an igloo up in the north pole and eating seal steaks.

And yes, I know you said one. I'm number challenged.

I've just posted one, but some others would be:

http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=62558
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=76636
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=74235
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=74212

and er, thats what I remember right now, I have others either posted or stashed in my secret mad poetry lab, I lose track.

Well, not all my villanelles can be vodka kisses. ;/ Tequila worm... thats been done me thinks.

Whats meh? Malaysian term for "shrug"? Blasted folks, why do you torture me?

As for goldmember, I didn't really like that movie... first austin powers flick was better.

Sexual? Well that wasn't my intention.. how does it come off as sexual? Please explain, I'm oblivious to the poems sexuality.

Started doesn't sound right either.. I'll edit that line in the future to get a better idea of possible alternative ways to put it, but for now I'll leave it as is.

it was "merry go around (my brain is now history)" that seemed to me a massive amount of writing which had little or no meaning, but appeared classy.. I don't think he meant to trick others, thats just my opinion of the poem- how it appeared to me.

Wounded Schoolboy? What are you talking about? The poem isn't an act of retaliation or something, its simply my way of turning my irritation into a artistic output..

Plus I was thinking about Icarus at the time and wanted to write something based on the story, but I didn't have a real idea how to start.. crwncka inspired me despite the fact that I didn't like that particular poem of his.. wounded? Far from it.

I read that poem of his and wrote this a while ago. I didn't post it then because at the time I saw it as one of my "journal entry poems".

It was something I wrote after reading a rubbish poem from crncraw (sp?) or whatever, don't remember exactly his penname...

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Indeed- think chris rock will have me as a musical guest with this skit?

dood, and i thought my stinger was a 50 pound cannon.

Im left with nothing to say.. really.. im almost compelled to feel sorry for them.. and.. -shakes his head-

Oh, im trying you out actually- with a meth injection. what do you think of the results??

Check out the remix, i think this is much better.

Oki- thanks for clearing that one up.