| Re: Few Too Little by talking_goldfish |
8-Aug-02/12:23 PM |
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| Re: In Debt by talking_goldfish |
8-Aug-02/12:30 PM |
i like your style
its lot better than a lot of the crap done by 18 year olds over the
water.
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| Re: My Path by badbilly6932 |
8-Aug-02/12:32 PM |
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thats a long poem!!!!! 7/10
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Aug-02/2:05 PM |
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there is a way out! just pick up the gun and slowly put it in your mouth.
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8-Aug-02/2:13 PM |
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be with the DARK LORD its more FUN
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Aug-02/1:05 PM |
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to many bitchings and to many little shitchings. wright more do not turn away
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| Re: The Red Tree by raysaun |
9-Aug-02/1:08 PM |
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I dont see snow much thank you
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9-Aug-02/2:05 PM |
and you are one of the biggest.
HORUS8
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| Re: I never Knew..... by SkateBoardGurl5799 |
9-Aug-02/2:11 PM |
THAT IS JUST SO GOOD
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.KEEP OF THE BIG D>>>>>>>>>
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9-Aug-02/2:50 PM |
THIS POEM MAKES ME SICK
AND I WONDER WHAT MAKES YOU TICK
try wright somthing without shit dick clit and shit in it there are other words you know.
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| Re: So you want to be a father by april fool |
11-Aug-02/11:59 AM |
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| Re: The King's Assassin by Twisted Wizard |
11-Aug-02/1:39 PM |
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| Re: The Girl Who Wasn't Me by psychedelic |
12-Aug-02/1:19 PM |
nice one! allways like like your stuff im just going to look at your
next one 8/10
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| Re: Remember by psychedelic |
12-Aug-02/1:24 PM |
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who are you wrighting your love poems TO? who is it?
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| Re: Broken by psychedelic |
12-Aug-02/1:30 PM |
some times you can want to much
and find yourself with nothing?
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| Re: Untitled by psychedelic |
12-Aug-02/1:32 PM |
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| Re: Who am I ? by SkateBoardGurl5799 |
14-Aug-02/11:56 AM |
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Like this one! people wright for lots of reasons, its good way to find out about yourself and who you realy are!!
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| Re: Alone by Lil_Chick_512 |
14-Aug-02/12:32 PM |
like this one!
pain comes with looking back
and trying to live there.!!!!!!! GO FORWORD
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8-Sep-02/2:38 PM |
like it!!!8/10
just one more thing are you alone!!!
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12-Oct-02/1:02 AM |
I think this is a very good thought out poem.and i could well piture the seen.8/10
ps. dont take any shit from razorgrin.she just gos round trashing peoples poems and telling
them how shit she thinks they are
HAVE YOU SEEN HER CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!
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