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Free verse № 8458

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Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

Guided by the skylight She peers at the world outside A world so vibrant and alive The complete opposite of how she felt inside Faded memories flood her mind Memories the man left behind Tightly she closes her eyes Trying to erase the pictures in her mind But the memories play on and on Oh, when would she ever learn to move on?

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[5] titan69 12-Aug-02/1:32 PM Reply
its time to move on!!!!!
[7] FadedHappiness 25-Aug-04/4:33 AM Reply
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