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Last Words (Free verse) by anagram Too bad, I couldn't take the pace
Living a life of disgrace
I had to go , to get away
Search myself to find the way
So often in despair
Quickly going nowhere
Caution to the wind
I blew up and I sinned
We could not share you see
Or could I live with me
Or with being what I am
Does anyone give a damn.
CSN
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Posted: August 18, 2002 6:06 PM PDT; Last modified: August 18, 2002 6:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9551764 Overall Rank: 8694 Comments:
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god'swife @ 209.179.213.120
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31-Aug-02/5:53 PM
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Again it seems like you're not finishing what you've begun. The subject is missing. Take the shot, quit dribbling the ball. CSN makes me think of Crosby, Stills & Nash. Are those your initals?
no.
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