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Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Aug 2002 · 3 comments

Too bad, I couldn't take the pace Living a life of disgrace I had to go , to get away Search myself to find the way So often in despair Quickly going nowhere Caution to the wind I blew up and I sinned We could not share you see Or could I live with me Or with being what I am Does anyone give a damn. CSN

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[n/a] god'swife 31-Aug-02/5:53 PM Reply
Again it seems like you're not finishing what you've begun. The subject is missing. Take the shot, quit dribbling the ball. CSN makes me think of Crosby, Stills & Nash. Are those your initals?
[n/a] anagram 31-Aug-02/5:57 PM Reply
Yes they are my initials the C and the N are anagrams of one another, hence my username.I feel I said what I wanted to and I got the point, but then I knew it before I started.
[n/a] Bachus 31-Aug-02/6:02 PM Reply
no.