Poemranker [Poem: Last Words] [by anagram] Mon May 13 08:43:17 PDT 2024

Last Words (Free verse) by anagram

Too bad, I couldn't take the pace Living a life of disgrace I had to go , to get away Search myself to find the way So often in despair Quickly going nowhere Caution to the wind I blew up and I sinned We could not share you see Or could I live with me Or with being what I am Does anyone give a damn. CSN

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8333335
Weighted score: 4.9551764
Overall Rank: 8689

Posted: August 18, 2002 6:06 PM PDT; Last modified: August 18, 2002 6:06 PM PDT
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[n/a] god'swife @ 209.179.213.120 | 31-Aug-02/5:53 PM | Reply

Again it seems like you're not finishing what you've begun. The subject is missing. Take the shot, quit dribbling the ball. CSN makes me think of Crosby, Stills & Nash. Are those your initals?

[n/a] anagram @ | 31-Aug-02/5:57 PM | Reply

Yes they are my initials the C and the N are anagrams of one another, hence my username.I feel I said what I wanted to and I got the point, but then I knew it before I started.

[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 31-Aug-02/6:02 PM | Reply

no.

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